自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly using the correct past tense: “had,” not “have.” Also, use “bike,” “bike ride,” and “its” instead of “hike,” “hi ride,” and “which.” Add one specific detail about the bike or where you rode it. Keep the answer natural and avoid unclear expressions such as “very famous on that day.”

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a simple red bike, and I really enjoyed riding it with my siblings around our neighborhood. We usually went cycling in the evening because the weather was cooler.

建議: Begin with a clear topic sentence, such as “Yes, bikes are very popular in India.” Avoid repetition and correct the unclear phrases “whites,” “I live from,” and “ride their walks.” Use “bikes,” “ride to work,” and “ride to other places.” Support your opinion with a specific reason or example, and use linking words such as “because” or “for example.”

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in India, especially in smaller cities and towns. Many people use them to commute to work, go shopping, or travel short distances because they are affordable and convenient. For example, I often ride my bike to nearby shops.

× Yes, when I was a child I have a hike which is very famous on that day and I really enjoy hi ride with my siblings.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had a bike, which was very popular at that time, and I really enjoyed riding it with my siblings.

The question asks about a past period, so the past-tense forms had, was, and enjoyed are required instead of have, is, and enjoy.

× Yes, when I was a child I have a hike which is very famous on that day and I really enjoy hi ride with my siblings.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had a bike, which was very popular at that time, and I really enjoyed riding it with my siblings.

After enjoy, use a gerund, or verb + -ing form. Therefore, enjoyed riding is correct, not enjoy ride. Remember: enjoy + verb-ing.

× Yes, when I was a child I have a hike which is very famous on that day and I really enjoy hi ride with my siblings.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had a bike, which was very popular at that time, and I really enjoyed riding it with my siblings.

The pronoun hi is incorrect. The object pronoun it refers back to the bike. Use it when referring to a singular thing that has already been mentioned.

× Definitely, whites are very Ver popular in my country I live from I live in India and most of Indian people use white to ride their walks and other places and I enjoy really ride off bike.

✓ Definitely, bikes are very popular in my country. I live in India, and most Indian people use bikes to ride to work and other places. I really enjoy riding a bike.

The original answer contains several ideas joined without appropriate punctuation or sentence boundaries. Divide the ideas into clear sentences and use a conjunction only when it connects related clauses.

× Definitely, whites are very Ver popular in my country I live from I live in India and most of Indian people use white to ride their walks and other places and I enjoy really ride off bike.

✓ Definitely, bikes are very popular in my country. I live in India, and most Indian people use bikes to ride to work and other places. I really enjoy riding a bike.

Bikes refers to more than one bicycle, so the plural form bikes is needed. Use the plural form when speaking about bicycles in general.

× Definitely, whites are very Ver popular in my country I live from I live in India and most of Indian people use white to ride their walks and other places and I enjoy really ride off bike.

✓ Definitely, bikes are very popular in my country. I live in India, and most Indian people use bikes to ride to work and other places. I really enjoy riding a bike.

Before a noun referring to people in general, use most Indian people, not most of Indian people. Use most of only before a determiner or pronoun, such as most of the people or most of them.

× Definitely, whites are very Ver popular in my country I live from I live in India and most of Indian people use white to ride their walks and other places and I enjoy really ride off bike.

✓ Definitely, bikes are very popular in my country. I live in India, and most Indian people use bikes to ride to work and other places. I really enjoy riding a bike.

The verb enjoy must be followed by a verb ending in -ing. Therefore, say enjoy riding, not enjoy ride. Also, use riding after really enjoy in this sentence.

× Definitely, whites are very Ver popular in my country I live from I live in India and most of Indian people use white to ride their walks and other places and I enjoy really ride off bike.

✓ Definitely, bikes are very popular in my country. I live in India, and most Indian people use bikes to ride to work and other places. I really enjoy riding a bike.

Use in with a country: live in India. Use to show a destination: ride to work. The prepositions from and off do not fit these meanings.

× Definitely, whites are very Ver popular in my country I live from I live in India and most of Indian people use white to ride their walks and other places and I enjoy really ride off bike.

✓ Definitely, bikes are very popular in my country. I live in India, and most Indian people use bikes to ride to work and other places. I really enjoy riding a bike.

A singular countable noun needs an article. In the final clause, say a bike because this refers to one non-specific bike. Use articles carefully with singular countable nouns.