自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer the question directly by saying whether you had a bike. Use the past tense consistently: “didn’t have” and “didn’t let.” Also, “I don’t have a child” means that you do not have a child of your own; you should say “I didn’t have a bike.” Add a brief reason to make the answer more developed and natural.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my father didn’t let me go out on my own. He was worried that I might get hurt in traffic, so I usually stayed at home or played with my friends nearby.

建議: Give a clear opening statement, then support it with accurate reasons and examples. Correct the word choices: “prefer” instead of “prepare,” “cars” instead of “deeply,” and “busy roads” instead of “peace roads.” Avoid “far very popular”; say “not very popular” or “not particularly popular.” Keep the comparison logical by explaining that motorcycles and cars are more convenient for daily travel, while bikes are mainly used for exercise or leisure.

範例: No, bicycles aren’t particularly popular in my country. Most people prefer motorcycles or cars for daily travel because they are faster and more convenient, especially on busy roads. As a result, people usually ride bikes for exercise, recreation, or short trips rather than commuting.

× No, I don't have a child when I was a child because my dad don't want me to go anywhere.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my dad didn't want me to go anywhere.

The question asks about a past situation, so the past simple form is required. Use didn't have instead of don't have and didn't want instead of don't want. After did or didn't, the main verb stays in its base form: didn't have and didn't want.

× No, I don't have a child when I was a child because my dad don't want me to go anywhere.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my dad didn't want me to go anywhere.

My dad is a third-person singular subject. In a present-tense negative sentence, it would require doesn't, not don't. Because this sentence describes the past, the correct negative form is didn't, which is used with all subjects.

× No, bicycles aren't far very popular in our country because most people prepare motorcycles or deeply for daily travel.

✓ No, bicycles aren't very popular in our country because most people prefer motorcycles for daily travel.

Far is not needed before very popular. Very is the appropriate adverb to modify popular. Also, prefer is the correct verb when expressing a choice between bicycles and motorcycles; prepare means to make something ready.

× They were cheaper and faster on peace roads, so cycling is usually only done for exercise or leisure.

✓ They are cheaper and faster on busy roads, so cycling is usually done only for exercise or leisure.

This sentence expresses a general fact, so the present tense are is more suitable than the past tense were. The adverb only is placed before the phrase for exercise or leisure to make the meaning clearer. Busy roads is also the natural expression for roads with a lot of traffic.