自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer the question directly and correct the grammar. Say “I had a bike” rather than “I had to buy,” and use the past tense consistently: “I enjoyed riding it.” Avoid repetitions such as “I I” and “in the in.” You can make the answer more effective by adding one specific detail about where you rode or what you did with your friends.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I enjoyed riding it around my neighborhood with my friends every afternoon. It was one of my favorite ways to explore the area and have fun.

建議: Give a clear opinion in the first sentence and support it with a reason or example. Correct the grammar and word choice: say “Most people in my country learn to ride a bike when they are children,” not “most of people offer... had learn.” To answer the question fully, explain whether people continue to use bikes as adults or mainly ride them for exercise and recreation.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Most people learn to ride a bike when they are children, and many continue cycling for exercise or short trips. However, in large cities, heavy traffic can make cycling less convenient.

× Yes, I I had to buy when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The subject pronoun I is repeated. In addition, the sentence needs an object after had to buy, but the intended meaning is probably that the student owned a bike. Use I only once and say I had a bike.

× I enjoy riding it around in the in neighborhood with my friend every afternoon and it was a favorite way to explore and play.

✓ I enjoyed riding it around in the neighborhood with my friend every afternoon, and it was a favorite way to explore and play.

The question asks about the student's childhood, so the answer should use the past tense. Change enjoy to enjoyed to describe a past habit.

× I enjoy riding it around in the in neighborhood with my friend every afternoon and it was a favorite way to explore and play.

✓ I enjoyed riding it around in the neighborhood with my friend every afternoon, and it was a favorite way to explore and play.

The preposition in is repeated. Use only one in before the noun phrase the neighborhood.

× I think most of people offer in my country had learn bike and when their child.

✓ I think most people in my country learned to ride a bike when they were children.

Use most people when referring to people in general. Most of must be followed by a determiner, such as most of the people.

× I think most of people offer in my country had learn bike and when their child.

✓ I think most people in my country learned to ride a bike when they were children.

The sentence describes something people learned in the past. Use the simple past learned rather than the incorrect form had learn.

× I think most of people offer in my country had learn bike and when their child.

✓ I think most people in my country learned to ride a bike when they were children.

The phrase their child does not agree with the plural subject most people. Use they were children to refer correctly to the people being discussed.

× I think most of people offer in my country had learn bike and when their child.

✓ I think most people in my country learned to ride a bike when they were children.

The original sentence has an incomplete and disorganized structure. Use the pattern learned to ride a bike when they were children to express the idea clearly and grammatically.