自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevabınız soruya doğrudan yanıt veriyor, ancak geçmişten bahsettiğiniz için “have” yerine “had” ve “have got” yerine “had” kullanmalısınız. Cümleniz yarım kalmış; bisikleti nerede kullandığınızı veya neden sevdiğinizi belirterek cevabı tamamlayın. Ayrıca “and I have some” ifadesi anlamsız ve eksik olduğu için çıkarılmalı ya da tamamlanmalıdır. İki veya üç bağlantılı cümle kullanarak daha akıcı ve etkili bir cevap verebilirsiniz.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was seven. It was a pink bike, and I really loved riding it around my neighbourhood. I usually rode it with my friends after school.

建議: Soruyu yanıtlamış ve bir neden vermişsiniz; ancak “spikes” yerine “bikes”, “fastly” yerine “quickly” veya “fast” kullanılmalıdır. “You will go anywhere” yerine genel bir durum anlatırken “you can get around easily” daha doğaldır. Fikirleriniz “but” ile düzensiz biçimde bağlanmış; önce bisikletlerin neden popüler olduğunu, ardından trafikte bisiklet sürmenin neden zor olduğunu ayrı ve açık cümlelerle açıklayın. “You can't re riding” yerine “you can’t ride” ve “in the road” yerine genellikle “on the road” denir.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short journeys. You can get around quickly and avoid traffic. However, cycling on the roads can be dangerous in big cities because there are so many cars.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was seven.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was seven.

The phrase when I was seven refers to a finished time in the past, so the past-tense form had is required instead of the present-tense form have. Use the past simple for completed situations in the past.

× I have got a pink bike and I have some

✓ I had a pink bike.

The student is describing a bike owned during childhood, so the past-tense form had is more appropriate than have got. The incomplete ending was removed because it does not provide a complete idea.

× I have got a pink bike and I have some

✓ I had a pink bike.

The sentence ends with some, but some requires a noun or another completed structure after it. This makes the sentence incomplete. Finish the idea, or omit some when no additional information is provided.

× Yes, I think spikes are popular in my country because you will go anywhere very fastly and clearly

✓ Yes, I think spikes are popular in my country because you can go anywhere very quickly and easily.

The sentence expresses a general ability or advantage, so can is more suitable than will. Will usually refers to the future or a prediction. Use can to describe what people are able to do in general.

× Yes, I think spikes are popular in my country because you will go anywhere very fastly and clearly

✓ Yes, I think spikes are popular in my country because you can go anywhere very quickly and easily.

Fastly is not normally used in standard English; the correct adverb is quickly or fast. Clearly does not fit the intended meaning, so easily is more natural when describing movement or transportation. Choose adverbs that accurately describe the action.

× but you can I think you can't re riding a bike in the road

✓ But I think you cannot ride a bike on the road.

The modal verb cannot must be followed by the base form of the verb, ride, not the -ing form riding. The phrase can I think you cannot also contains conflicting modal expressions, so it should be replaced with the clear structure I think you cannot ride.

× you can't re riding a bike in the road

✓ you cannot ride a bike on the road

After cannot, use the base form of the verb: cannot ride. Do not use riding after this modal verb. Modal verbs such as can, cannot, and will are followed by the base form.

× you can't re riding a bike in the road

✓ you cannot ride a bike on the road

Use on, rather than in, when referring to a road or other surface. The natural phrase is ride a bike on the road.

× because so many cars in the road

✓ because there are so many cars on the road.

A complete statement about the existence of cars requires there are before the plural noun cars. Also, the natural preposition is on the road, not in the road. Use there is with singular nouns and there are with plural nouns.

× but you can I think you can't re riding a bike in the road because so many cars in the road.

✓ But I think you cannot ride a bike on the road because there are so many cars on the road.

The original sentence contains several clauses in an unclear order and repeats conflicting expressions. Place the opinion phrase I think before the main clause, use the correct modal structure cannot ride, and connect the reason with because there are so many cars.