自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答基本表达了“小时候没有自行车”的意思，但存在较多词汇和语法错误，影响理解。例如，“hide a bike”应改为“have a bike”，“in my child”应改为“when I was a child”，“didn't start to ride it”表达不自然。建议先直接回答“No, I didn’t”，然后补充一个清晰的原因；如果不确定父母的想法，不要加入“let me guess”等不完整表达。可以使用“because”连接原因，并控制在2—3句内。

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I never learned how to ride one because my parents thought it was a little dangerous. I usually walked to school instead.

建議: 你能够进行过去与现在的比较，也提到了经济发展和汽车普及这两个原因，内容方向是合理的。但需要改进自行车、汽车等关键词的发音或拼写对应表达：“Backs”和“bags”应为“bikes”，“in the twentieth century”与“in the twenty century”应统一；“the country's economy is got better”应改为“the economy has improved”，“cars have become common in many families”比“the car is coming to every families”更自然。建议开头先明确回答“现在不如过去流行”，再用“because”或“as a result”组织原因和结果。

範例: Bikes used to be very popular in my country, especially in the twentieth century. However, they are less common now because the economy has improved and more families can afford cars. As a result, many people prefer driving to cycling.

× No, I didn't hide a bike in my child because I didn't start to ride it.

✓ No, I didn't hide a bike as a child because I didn't start to ride it.

“in my child”中的介词使用错误。表示“小时候”时，应使用“as a child”，而不是“in my child”。

× My parents think it may be lets me guess introduce.

✓ My parents thought it might be, let me guess, introduced.

整段回答是在描述童年时期的情况，因此“think”应改为过去式“thought”。在过去时态的间接表达中，“may”通常相应改为“might”。

× My parents think it may be lets me guess introduce.

✓ My parents thought it might be, let me guess, introduced.

情态动词“might”后面需要接动词原形。“be introduced”是正确结构，其中“be”是动词原形。不能使用“lets”或“introduce”这样的错误组合。

× My parents think it may be lets me guess introduce.

✓ My parents thought it might be, let me guess, introduced.

“be”后面表示被动语态时，需要使用动词的过去分词形式，因此“introduce”应改为“introduced”，构成“be introduced”。

× No, I didn't hide a bike in my child because I didn't start to ride it My parents think it may be lets me guess introduce.

✓ No, I didn't hide a bike as a child because I didn't start to ride it. My parents thought it might be, let me guess, introduced.

原句缺少句号，多个意思不同的部分被连接在一起，导致句子结构混乱。应将完整意思分成两个句子，并使用正确的标点。

× Bikes are popular in my country in the twentieth century, but in twenty century the country's economy is got better so the car is coming to every families and the bags are not popular before.

✓ Bikes were popular in my country in the twentieth century, but in the twenty-first century, the country's economy got better, so cars came to every family, and bikes were not as popular as before.

“every”后面必须接单数可数名词，所以“every families”应改为“every family”。这里表示许多汽车时，应使用复数“cars”，而不是单数“the car”。

× Bikes are popular in my country in the twentieth century, but in twenty century the country's economy is got better so the car is coming to every families and the bags are not popular before.

✓ Bikes were popular in my country in the twentieth century, but in the twenty-first century, the country's economy got better, so cars came to every family, and bikes were not as popular as before.

句子描述的是过去的历史情况，所以应统一使用过去时：“are”改为“were”，“is got better”改为“got better”，“is coming”改为“came”，“are”改为“were”。

× Bikes are popular in my country in the twentieth century, but in twenty century the country's economy is got better so the car is coming to every families and the bags are not popular before.

✓ Bikes were popular in my country in the twentieth century, but in the twenty-first century, the country's economy got better, so cars came to every family, and bikes were not as popular as before.

表示具体的世纪时，序数词前通常需要定冠词“the”。因此“in twenty century”应改为“in the twenty-first century”。同时，“twenty-first”是正确的序数词形式。

× The country's economy is got better.

✓ The country's economy got better.

“get better”表示“变得更好”，这里应使用主动形式“got better”，不能使用错误的“is got better”。“is got”不是正确的被动语态结构。

× Bikes are popular in my country in the twentieth century, but in twenty century the country's economy is got better so the car is coming to every families and the bags are not popular before.

✓ Bikes were popular in my country in the twentieth century, but in the twenty-first century, the country's economy got better, so cars came to every family, and bikes were not as popular as before.

原句包含多个独立意思，连接词和标点使用不足，造成结构混乱。应在“the twenty-first century”后加逗号，在“got better”后加逗号，并使用“so”和“and”清楚地连接各个分句。