自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer the examiner's question directly instead of repeating it. Use the phrase “when I was a child,” not “on your child.” Give a clear yes/no answer and add one specific detail, such as how often you used the bike or where you rode it.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends after school. It was a simple blue bike, but I really enjoyed using it.

建議: Your answer is relevant, but correct the grammar: say “Bikes are very popular” and “Every child has a bike.” Avoid the unclear expression “UH-1.” Support your opinion with a specific reason or example, and use a linking word such as “because” or “for example.”

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially among children. Almost every child has a bike because cycling is an easy and affordable way to have fun. For example, many children ride their bikes in parks or around their neighborhoods.

× Did you have a bike on your child?

✓ Did you have a bike as a child?

The preposition on is incorrect when referring to someone's age or period of childhood. Use as a child to mean when you were a child. Note that the examiner's question was already grammatically correct, so this correction changes only the student's answer.

× Yeah, it's very popular.

✓ Yeah, they’re very popular.

The noun bikes is plural, so it should be replaced by the plural pronoun they, not the singular pronoun it. The plural form of the verb is also needed: they’re means they are.

× Every child have UH-1 bike.

✓ Every child has a bike.

Every child is a singular subject, so the verb must be has, not have. In addition, a singular countable noun such as bike needs the indefinite article a. The expression a bike is the natural form here.