自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答切题，并提供了父母买车、偶尔骑车上学以及不常骑车的原因，内容比较具体。建议删掉开头的重复表达“Yeah, well, I did have”，并修正“learned to my ride”为“learned to ride”。此外，“they're really close to the school”指代不清，应改为“my home and school were really close”。可以使用“However”或“That said”连接转折，使表达更自然。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought me a blue one, and I occasionally rode it to school. However, I rarely used it because there was heavy traffic, and my home was quite close to my school.

建議: 回答基本回应了问题，也提到城市居民和共享单车，但开头“sometimes I mean I guess”过于犹豫，影响流利度；“you got to have one”过于口语化且语气绝对，建议改为“many people choose to have one”。“share bikes”应改为更自然的“shared bikes”或“bike-sharing services”。建议先明确表态，再补充城市中的使用情况、环保原因和具体例子，并用“Moreover”或“because”组织信息。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. Many people use bicycles or bike-sharing services for short journeys because they are convenient and environmentally friendly. For example, commuters often ride shared bikes from a subway station to their offices.

× I learned to my ride the bike to school occasionally.

✓ I learned to ride my bike to school occasionally.

“to”后面应接动词原形“ride”，不能在“to”和动词之间插入“my”。表示所属关系的“my”应放在名词“bike”前面。建议记住结构：learn to do something，以及“my + 名词”。

× Not very often, there's too much traffic out there.

✓ I didn't ride it very often because there was too much traffic out there.

这段话描述的是学生小时候的情况，应该使用过去时。“there's”是一般现在时，应改为过去时“there was”。同时，原句“Not very often”本身不是完整句子，补充主语和动词后表达更完整、自然。

× If you're living in the city you got to have one

✓ If you live in the city, you've got to have one.

“got to”前面通常需要助动词“have”，完整形式是“have got to”；口语中常缩写为“you’ve got to”。另外，这里表达普遍情况，使用一般现在时“live”比“are living”更自然。

× you can use share bikes

✓ you can use shared bikes

“共享的自行车”中的“共享”是已经完成的动作，用过去分词“shared”作前置定语，而不是动词原形“share”。类似表达还有“used cars”（二手车）和“recycled paper”（再生纸）。

× because they're easy to get around

✓ because they're easy to get around on

表示“骑自行车出行”时，短语应为“get around on bikes”。这里“on”表示使用某种交通工具，因此应说“bikes are easy to get around on”。