自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer the question directly and keep the tense consistent. If you mean that you did not own a bicycle, say “I didn’t have a bicycle.” If you did own one, explain when and how you used it. Avoid the unnatural phrase “I did not bike” and use “ride a bike” instead. Add one specific detail to make your answer more developed.

範例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. I used to ride it to school almost every day because it was convenient and enjoyable.

建議: Begin with a clear topic sentence and use correct subject–verb agreement: “Bikes are very popular.” Avoid repetition such as “popular,” “convenient,” and “affordable” in the same structure, and replace “very cheaper” with “much cheaper” or simply “cheap.” Organize your reasons with linking words such as “because” and “also,” and use a natural phrase like “a practical means of transport” instead of “a useful little thing of bike.”

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in crowded cities. They are affordable and convenient, and they can help people avoid heavy traffic. In addition, many people choose them because they are environmentally friendly.

× No, I did not bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The question asks whether you possessed a bike in the past, so have should be changed to the past-tense form had. Also, have a bike answers the question more accurately than bike, which usually means ride a bicycle.

× I have a bicycle and I go to the school with my bicycle.

✓ I had a bicycle and went to school on it.

Because the question refers to your childhood, the verbs should be in the past tense: have becomes had and go becomes went. The pronoun it avoids unnecessary repetition of my bicycle.

× Yes absolutely Bikes is very popular in our country

✓ Yes, absolutely. Bikes are very popular in our country.

Bikes is plural, so it must be followed by the plural verb are, not the singular verb is. Use plural agreement when talking about bikes in general.

× because it is convenient and very cheaper

✓ because they are convenient and much cheaper

Cheaper is already a comparative adjective, so very cheaper is incorrect. Use much cheaper for emphasis. Since bikes is plural, use they are instead of it is.

× so it is very affordable to people

✓ so they are very affordable for people

The natural preposition used with affordable when referring to people is for, not to. Also, bikes is plural, so the pronoun should be they rather than it.

× so it's a useful little thing of bike.

✓ so a bike is a useful means of transportation.

Thing of bike is not a natural English structure. Use a bike as the subject and describe its function with a clear noun phrase such as a useful means of transportation.