自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答基本直接，但有两个主要问题：第一，谈论过去应使用过去时，应将“have”改为“had”；第二，“I’m really excited to exercise”表达不自然，而且重复使用“really”。可以先直接回答“是的，我小时候有一辆自行车”，然后说明你经常和家人一起骑车，以及这项活动给你带来的感受。建议使用“because”或“so”连接原因，并加入一个具体活动细节。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it with my family at weekends, which was a fun way to exercise and spend time together.

建議: 回答有明确观点，也提供了公司和地形两个细节，因此内容较充实。不过，“By the Bike”是不自然且重复的表达，应改为“bikes”或“cycling”；“the biggest bicycle company in the world”如果没有确切依据，建议改为“one of the biggest bicycle companies”。此外，最后一句可以更清楚地说明山地如何吸引人们骑车，并减少停顿词。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in Taiwan. One reason is that Giant, one of the world’s leading bicycle companies, is based there. In addition, Taiwan has many beautiful mountains and scenic roads, so many people enjoy cycling outdoors.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child because uh, I'm really, uh, I'm really excited to exercise with my family.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child because I was really excited to exercise with my family.

“when I was a child”明确表示过去时间，因此“have”应改为过去式“had”。原因部分也描述童年时的感受，所以“I'm”应改为过去式“was”。回答过去经历时，要保持主要动词和相关状态动词的时态一致。

× Yes, I think By the Bike is popular in my country because the biggest, uh, bicycle company in the world is called Giant. It's from Taiwan and umm, Taiwan has many mountains for people to ride.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because the biggest bicycle company in the world is called Giant. It's from Taiwan, and Taiwan has many mountains for people to ride.

问题问的是“bikes”这一类交通工具是否受欢迎，因此主语应使用复数“bikes”，并搭配复数动词“are”。“By the Bike”不是正确的表达；这里应为“bikes”。另外，删除语气词“uh”和“umm”可以使回答更加自然、清晰。