自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer the question directly, and then add one or two specific details, such as when you received the bike and how you used it. The answer is well organized, but “potty purple” should be “bright purple” or “a vivid purple,” and “learn to light” should be “learn to ride.” Use a linking word such as “because” to connect the personal detail to your opinion. Keep the response natural and within four or five sentences.

範例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. My mum gave it to me as a birthday present when I was six. It was bright purple, and I loved it because it felt very special. I also used it to learn how to ride around my neighborhood.

建議: The answer gives a clear opinion and relevant reasons, but “For these lessons” should be “For these reasons,” and “daily trails” should be “daily travel” or “daily journeys.” Add a specific example or comparison to make the response more effective, such as explaining that people use motorcycles for commuting. Use a linking phrase such as “As a result” to show the connection between the reasons and the conclusion.

範例: No, bikes are not very popular in my country because the climate is usually hot and there are very few dedicated bike lanes. For these reasons, most people prefer to use motorcycles or cars for commuting. As a result, cycling is mainly seen as a leisure activity rather than a practical way to travel every day.