自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is grammatically correct and directly answers the question, but it is too brief. Add one or two specific details, such as when you used the bike, where you rode it, or how you felt about it. Use a linking word such as “and” or “because” to make the response more developed.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I usually rode it around my neighborhood after school, and I really enjoyed exploring the area with my friends.

建議: Answer the question directly without saying “why?” Also, use “they” for bikes instead of “he,” and say “Bikes aren’t popular” rather than “He’s not popular.” Improve the sentence structure by using a linking word and the natural expression “use cars for transportation.” Add a specific reason or comparison to support your opinion.

範例: No, bikes aren’t very popular in Iran because most people use cars for transportation. In addition, many cities are crowded and do not have enough bike lanes, so driving is often more convenient.

× He's not popular in Iran.

✓ They aren't popular in Iran.

Bikes is plural, so the plural pronoun they must be used instead of the singular pronoun he. The verb also changes from is to are to agree with they. Use it for one bike and they for two or more bikes.

× We use car for transporting.

✓ We use cars for transportation.

The sentence refers to cars in general, so the plural noun cars is needed instead of the singular noun car. Transportation is the natural noun for the general activity; transporting usually needs an object, such as transporting people.