自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevabınız soruya doğrudan yanıt vermeye çalışıyor, ancak bazı kelimeler ve zaman yapıları anlaşılmayı zorlaştırıyor. “I have read the doll bike” ve “I allow the bike” ifadeleri doğal değil; muhtemelen “I had a little bike” ve “I loved riding it” demek istediniz. Geçmişteki çocukluk deneyimlerinden bahsederken “had” ve “loved” gibi geçmiş zaman yapılarını kullanın. Cevabı bir neden veya kısa bir ayrıntıyla zenginleştirin.

範例: Yes, I had a little bike when I was a child, and I loved riding it around my neighborhood. I often used it to visit my friends after school.

建議: Fikrinizi ve nedeninizi belirttiğiniz için temel yapı mevcut; ancak cevapta tekrarlar, duraksamalar ve bazı dilbilgisi hataları var. “little peoples” yerine “young children”, “Childs” yerine “children” ve “use bike” yerine “use bikes” veya “ride their bikes” kullanın. “It’s easy in the traffic” doğal olmadığı için “it is easier to get through traffic” ya da “it helps them avoid traffic” demelisiniz. Ayrıca ülkenizde bisikletlerin kimler tarafından kullanıldığını ve bunun nedenini daha akıcı bir bağlaçla açıklayın.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young children and students. Many children ride their bikes to school because cycling is affordable and helps them avoid heavy traffic. However, some roads are not very safe for cyclists.

× Yes, when I was a child I have read the doll bike and I allow the bike.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I rode a bike and enjoyed riding it.

The question asks about a past experience, so the simple past is needed. Use rode instead of the present perfect form have read, and enjoyed instead of the present-tense form allow. Also, read does not have the intended meaning here; rode is the correct verb for traveling on a bike.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because uh, little peoples like Childs when I when they are going to school, they use bike because it's easy in the traffic for the peoples.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because little people, such as children, use bikes when they go to school. Bikes are convenient in traffic.

People is already the plural form of person, so peoples is incorrect in this context. The plural form of child is children, not childs. Because the subject is plural, use bikes rather than bike. These plural forms should agree with the meaning of the sentence.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because uh, little peoples like Childs when I when they are going to school, they use bike because it's easy in the traffic for the peoples.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because little people, such as children, use bikes when they go to school. Bikes are convenient in traffic.

For a general fact, use the simple present. The phrase when they are going to school suggests an action in progress, but when they go to school is more suitable for a regular habit. Keep the verb tense consistent when describing repeated actions.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because uh, little peoples like Childs when I when they are going to school, they use bike because it's easy in the traffic for the peoples.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because little people, such as children, use bikes when they go to school. Bikes are convenient in traffic.

A singular countable noun normally needs an article, but the general meaning here requires the plural noun bikes. We also normally say in traffic, not in the traffic, when referring to traffic in general. The unnecessary article and awkward noun phrase have been removed.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because uh, little peoples like Childs when I when they are going to school, they use bike because it's easy in the traffic for the peoples.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because little people, such as children, use bikes when they go to school. Bikes are convenient in traffic.

The phrase when I when they contains a repeated and conflicting conjunction-pronoun structure. Use one clear subject and conjunction: when they go to school. The original sentence also joins several ideas awkwardly, so dividing it into two sentences makes the structure clearer.