自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答直接表达了“没有自行车”，并给出了原因，但存在明显的语法、词汇和句子结构问题。“haven't”应改为过去时“didn't have”，“back”应为“bike”；“because my family members have no money”需要改为完整、自然的句子。建议使用“Although/because”等连接词，并把原因完整说明。

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn’t afford one. I usually walked to school or played with my friends near my home.

建議: 回答的观点是清楚的，但“bags”应为“bikes”，“a healthy style to exercise body”表达不自然，可以说“a healthy way to exercise”或“a healthy form of transportation”。最后的“I like to I like”是重复和未完成表达。建议补充一个具体原因或例子，例如骑自行车可以锻炼身体、避免交通拥堵，并用完整句子结束回答。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and office workers. Many people use them because cycling is a healthy way to exercise and it is also convenient for short journeys. In addition, bikes can help people avoid traffic jams.

× No, I haven't a back when I was a child because my family members. Have no money to buy it.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family members had no money to buy one.

句子中的“when I was a child”明确表示过去时间，因此不能使用现在时“haven't”，应改为过去时“didn't have”。“Have no money”也应改为过去时“had no money”，因为家庭当时没有钱。这里根据问题语境将“back”改为“bike”。

× because my family members. Have no money to buy it.

✓ because my family members had no money to buy one.

“because my family members”后面缺少谓语动词，不能单独构成完整的从句。应加入“had”，组成完整结构“my family members had no money”。同时，“one”可以代替前面提到的“bike”，避免重复使用“it”。

× Many people think it is a healthy style to exercise body and I like to I like

✓ Many people think cycling is a healthy way to exercise, and I like it.

原句后半部分“I like to I like”重复且结构不完整，导致句子结构错误。应删去重复内容，并使用完整句子“I like it”。“cycling”可以清楚地说明人们认为骑自行车是一种健康的锻炼方式。

× Many people think it is a healthy style to exercise body and I like to I like

✓ Many people think cycling is a healthy way to exercise the body, and I like it.

可数名词“body”前通常需要限定词。这里使用定冠词“the”，构成“exercise the body”。不过在英语中“exercise”单独使用也很自然，因此更推荐使用前一个修改后的表达：“a healthy way to exercise”。