自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer the question directly using the past tense: say “I had a bike,” not “I have a bike.” Correct the word “back” to “bike” and use “rode” instead of “ride” because you are describing the past. Add one specific detail, such as how often you used the bike or what you liked about it. Use a linking word such as “because” or “and” to connect the detail naturally.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it to school because it was faster than walking. It was a simple blue bike, but I really enjoyed using it.

建議: Give a clearer topic sentence by saying “Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country.” Use the natural expressions “most people,” “ride bikes,” and “along the river” instead of “most of people,” “ride bike,” and “around the river.” Since the question asks about current popularity, use the present tense “ride,” not “will ride.” Add a specific reason or example, such as exercise, convenience, or bike-sharing services.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. Many people ride them along the river or in parks because cycling is a convenient way to exercise. Some cities also have bike-sharing services, which makes cycling even more accessible.

× Yes, I have a back when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The phrase when I was a child refers to the past, so the past-tense form had is required instead of the present-tense form have. Bike is also used in the correction because back appears to be a spelling error, not a grammar issue.

× In my childhood I ride my bike to my school.

✓ In my childhood, I rode my bike to school.

The sentence describes a past habit, so ride must be changed to its past-tense form rode. A comma after the introductory phrase In my childhood improves sentence punctuation. The phrase to school is the natural expression when referring to school in general.

× Yes, most of people in my country will ride bike around the river or in the park.

✓ Yes, most people in my country ride bikes around the river or in the park.

Most must be followed by a plural noun without of, as in most people, or by of plus a determiner, as in most of the people. Therefore, most of people is incorrect.

× Yes, most of people in my country will ride bike around the river or in the park.

✓ Yes, most people in my country ride bikes around the river or in the park.

The sentence refers to bicycles in general, so the plural countable noun bikes is more appropriate than the singular form bike.

× Yes, most of people in my country will ride bike around the river or in the park.

✓ Yes, most people in my country ride bikes around the river or in the park.

The question asks about a general present situation, not a future plan or prediction. Use the present simple ride rather than the future form will ride when describing a regular or general activity.