自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: You repeated the examiner's question instead of answering it, so the response does not address the question. Give a direct answer first, such as “Yes, I did” or “No, I didn’t,” and then add one specific supporting detail. Keep the response to two or three natural sentences.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about eight, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

建議: Your answer is relevant and gives reasons and examples, but it is repetitive and contains several grammar and word-choice problems. Replace “There are many bikers who ride The Who ride” with “Many people ride different kinds of bikes,” use “hill stations” only if this is the intended local term, and say “during the summer” and “go on short trips.” Avoid repeating your opinion in the final sentence; instead, organize the answer with a linking word such as “For example.”

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride different kinds of bikes, especially when they travel to hill stations or go on short trips during the summer. For example, groups of motorcyclists often take weekend trips to explore the countryside.

× There are many bikers who ride The Who ride different kinds of bike and they go on a different kind of hill stations and for a vacation on their bikes.

✓ There are many bikers who ride different kinds of bikes, and they go to different hill stations and on vacation on their bikes.

The phrase The Who ride is an incorrect repetition that disrupts the sentence structure. Removing it makes the relative clause grammatically complete. The revised sentence also uses clearer parallel structures: ride different kinds of bikes, go to different hill stations, and go on vacation.

× There are many bikers who ride The Who ride different kinds of bike and they go on a different kind of hill stations and for a vacation on their bikes.

✓ There are many bikers who ride different kinds of bikes, and they go to different hill stations and on vacation on their bikes.

The plural noun kinds requires the plural noun bikes, not bike. Also, different hill stations refers to more than one station, so hill stations should not be preceded by the singular article a.

× There are many bikers who ride The Who ride different kinds of bike and they go on a different kind of hill stations and for a vacation on their bikes.

✓ There are many bikers who ride different kinds of bikes, and they go to different hill stations and on vacation on their bikes.

Use go to when referring to a destination such as hill stations. Use go on vacation rather than go for a vacation in this context. These prepositions express the intended destination and activity more naturally.

× Even during summer season many bikers go on a short trip.

✓ Even during the summer season, many bikers go on a short trip.

The singular countable noun season is specified by the context, so it normally requires the definite article the. A comma is also helpful after the introductory phrase, although punctuation is not the main grammar issue here.