自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevabınız soruya doğrudan yanıt veriyor ve bisikletinizin özelliklerini açıklıyorsunuz. Ancak “when I was child” ifadesi yerine “when I was a child” kullanmalısınız. “That bike” ifadesini tekrar etmek yerine “It” kullanarak cevabı daha doğal ve etkili hâle getirebilirsiniz. Yan tekerlekleri açıklarken “training wheels” kelimesini kullanmanız, bağlama uygun ve daha doğal bir kelime seçimi olur. Cevabınızı bir sonuç veya kişisel yorumla zenginleştirebilirsiniz.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My first bike was very small and had two training wheels at the back. I remember learning to ride it in front of my house, and I was really proud when I finally managed to ride without help.

建議: Ana fikriniz açık ve bisikletlerin çocuklar arasında popüler olmasının nedenlerini veriyorsunuz. Ancak “especially if you're a child in a small city, you should have a bike” kısmı doğal değildir; bunun yerine “especially among children in smaller cities” diyebilirsiniz. “It’s good It’s a good sport” ifadesinde tekrar ve dilbilgisi hatası var; “cycling is a healthy form of exercise” daha doğal olur. Fikirlerinizi “because” ve “also” gibi bağlaçlarla düzenleyin ve ülke genelinde bisiklet kullanımının çocuklarla sınırlı olduğunu belirtmek istiyorsanız bunu netleştirin. En fazla üç veya dört cümleyle akıcı ve destekli bir cevap vermeniz yeterlidir.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in Turkey, especially among children in smaller cities. They are a healthy form of exercise, and they allow children to spend time outdoors with their friends. However, cycling is less common in large cities because of heavy traffic and a lack of safe bike lanes.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The singular countable noun child needs the indefinite article a. Use a before a singular noun when referring to one person or thing in a general way.

× My first bike was very small and that bike had two smaller wheels at the side of the back wheel.

✓ My first bike was very small, and it had two smaller wheels on either side of the back wheel.

The preposition on is used to describe the position of something beside or attached to a side. The phrase at the side of is not natural in this context. Also, it is clearer to use it instead of repeating that bike.

× Yes, bikes are popular in Turkey, especially if you're a child in a small city, you should have a bike because it's good It's a good sport and you can spend time with your friends.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in Turkey. Especially if you're a child in a small city, you should have a bike because it's a good sport and you can spend time with your friends.

The singular countable noun sport needs the indefinite article a because it refers to one type of sport. The corrected sentence removes the unnecessary repetition of it's good and keeps the intended meaning.

× Yes, bikes are popular in Turkey, especially if you're a child in a small city, you should have a bike because it's good It's a good sport and you can spend time with your friends.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in Turkey. Especially if you're a child in a small city, you should have a bike because it's a good sport, and you can spend time with your friends.

The original sentence joins several independent ideas with commas and repeats the phrase it's good. A full stop separates the first complete idea, and the repeated words are removed. Use a comma before and when it joins two related clauses.