自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly in the past tense: use “I didn’t have,” not “I don’t had.” Avoid repeating “when I was a child,” and replace the unnatural phrase “the next wonderful experience” with a natural expression such as “a wonderful experience.” You could also add one specific detail about where you rode or how you felt.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child, but my father had one, and I used to sit behind him when we went to the market. It was a wonderful experience because I enjoyed spending time with him.

建議: Give a clear answer using “bikes,” not “banks,” and include a reason or specific example. The phrase “Yes, my country” is incomplete; say “Yes, bikes are very popular in my country.” Use a linking word such as “because” to explain why people ride them.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in Bangladesh, especially in cities. Many people use them because they are affordable and convenient for travelling through busy traffic. They are also becoming more popular as a way to exercise.

× No, I don't had a bike when I was a child, but my father had one and I used to ride behind with him when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but my father had one, and I used to ride behind him.

Because the question asks about the past, use the simple past negative form 'didn't have,' not 'don't had.' After 'didn't,' the main verb must be in its base form: 'have.' Also, 'ride behind him' is the natural prepositional phrase; 'with him' is unnecessary here.

× No, I don't had a bike when I was a child, but my father had one and I used to ride behind with him when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but my father had one, and I used to ride behind him.

When describing someone's position on a bike, use 'behind him,' not 'behind with him.' The preposition 'behind' is followed directly by the person or object being described.

× Yes, my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country.

'Yes, my country' is not a complete sentence because it does not contain a verb. A complete answer needs a subject and a verb, such as 'bikes are popular.'

× In Bangladesh banks are very popular.

✓ In Bangladesh, bikes are very popular.

The question is about bikes, so the noun should be 'bikes,' not 'banks.' 'Bikes' is plural because it refers to bicycles in general.