自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer the question directly and avoid repeating the same idea. “I didn’t have a bike” is enough as the main answer, followed by one clear reason or detail. Also, “I’m only 21 years old” is not relevant to whether you had a bike as a child, and “I didn’t have any bike” is less natural than “I didn’t have a bike.”

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I wasn’t interested in cycling, so I usually played indoors or walked to nearby places.

建議: Your answer has a clear opinion and some supporting details, but it contains several grammar and word-choice errors. Say “especially among children” instead of “especially among boys” if you mean young people generally, and use “learn to ride them” rather than “learn it.” The correct form is “their parents don’t want to buy them,” and the final idea needs to be completed, such as “because they are worried about accidents.” Use a linking word such as “However” to connect the contrasting idea.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children and teenagers. Many of them enjoy riding bikes because it is fun and convenient. However, some parents hesitate to buy bikes because they are worried about traffic accidents.

× Basically, no, I didn't have any bike.

✓ Basically, no, I didn't have a bike.

The singular countable noun bike needs the indefinite article a when referring to one unspecified bike. Say have a bike, not have any bike, in this context.

× And when I was a child, definitely I didn't have any bike.

✓ When I was a child, I definitely didn't have a bike.

The singular countable noun bike needs the article a. The phrase have a bike is the natural way to say that you did not own one bike.

× And when I was a child, definitely I didn't have any bike.

✓ When I was a child, I definitely didn't have a bike.

The adverb definitely should generally come after the subject and before the main verb or auxiliary verb. I definitely didn't have is the correct word order.

× They love to ride bikes and they just love to learn it.

✓ They love to ride bikes, and they just love to learn to ride them.

The pronoun it is singular, but it refers to bikes, which is plural. Also, learn should be followed by an infinitive phrase here: learn to ride them. Use them to refer to plural bikes.

× Sometimes their parents does not want to buy it because it will cause any.

✓ Sometimes their parents do not want to buy them because bikes may cause problems.

Parents is a plural subject, so it must be followed by do, not does. Use do not want, not does not want.

× Sometimes their parents does not want to buy it because it will cause any.

✓ Sometimes their parents do not want to buy them because bikes may cause problems.

The pronoun it is singular, but it refers to bikes, which is plural. Use them when referring to the bikes. Replacing the second it with bikes also makes the meaning clearer.

× Sometimes their parents does not want to buy it because it will cause any.

✓ Sometimes their parents do not want to buy them because bikes may cause problems.

The quantifier any must normally modify a noun, as in any problems. The original phrase cause any is incomplete. Problems is the appropriate noun in this context.