自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer the question directly and use a clear, simple structure. Avoid repeating words and pause briefly to organize your ideas. You should say when you had the bike and explain why you liked riding it. Also, use the correct phrase “when I was a child” and the past tense “I had a bike.”

範例: Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child, and I often rode it around my neighborhood. I enjoyed riding because it was fun and gave me a sense of freedom.

建議: Start with a clear opinion, then give one or two specific reasons. Avoid fillers, repetition, and unfinished phrases. Use accurate expressions such as “Bikes are popular in my country” and “Many children learn to ride bikes when they are young.” You could also mention where people ride bikes or why cycling is useful.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many children learn to ride when they are young, and adults often cycle for exercise or transportation. In addition, bikes are convenient because they are inexpensive and environmentally friendly.

× Yes, I did I when when I was a cheers.

✓ Yes, I did when I was a child.

The sentence has repeated words and an incomplete, disorganized structure. Use one complete clause: Yes, I did, followed by the time expression when I was a child.

× I have advice because I want to ride a bike.

✓ I had a bike because I wanted to ride one.

The question asks about the past, so use the past forms had and wanted. Use bike rather than advice because advice is an uncountable noun meaning a recommendation, not a vehicle.

× Yes, I do, since buy, buys, population in country.

✓ Yes, I do. Bikes are popular because my country has a large population.

The original phrase does not contain a clear, complete sentence with an appropriate verb. Use Bikes are popular as the main clause and my country has a large population as the reason.

× Because children also is likely to like bikes when there was young.

✓ Children are also likely to like bikes when they are young.

Children is plural, so it must be followed by are, not is. The pronoun they correctly refers to children, and the plural subject requires the plural verb are.

× When there was young.

✓ When they were young.

There was is used to say that something existed, as in There was a bike. It cannot describe the age of people. Use they were young because they refers to the children.