自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời chỉ lặp lại câu hỏi và chưa đưa ra thông tin cá nhân. Em cần trả lời trực tiếp bằng “Yes” hoặc “No”, sau đó thêm 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể như thời điểm em có xe đạp, mục đích sử dụng hoặc cảm xúc của em. Nên dùng thì quá khứ đơn vì câu hỏi nói về thời thơ ấu.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought me a small blue one when I was about eight. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

建議: Em đã trả lời đúng chủ đề và đưa ra lý do, nhưng câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp: “by/buy” cần sửa thành “bikes”, “people in very older age” nên đổi thành “older people”, và “usually using” nên đổi thành “usually use”. Hãy mở đầu bằng câu trả lời rõ ràng, sau đó dùng từ nối như “because” để giải thích. Ngoài ra, ý “older people” chưa thật chính xác nếu em muốn nói nhiều người nói chung; hãy nêu rõ nhóm người và mục đích sử dụng xe đạp, chẳng hạn đi lại hoặc tập thể dục.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in Vietnam, especially among students and older people. Many people use them to travel short distances, exercise, or avoid traffic jams. However, motorbikes are still more common for daily transportation.

× Oh, uh, I think uh by is very popular in my country, especially in Vietnam because a lot of people in very older age usually using buy to go to another place.

✓ Oh, uh, I think bikes are very popular in my country, especially in Vietnam, because a lot of older people usually use bikes to go to other places.

The plural noun bikes is needed because the answer refers to bicycles in general. The plural form bikes is also needed after use because older people use more than one bicycle in general. Other places is more natural when referring to various destinations.

× Oh, uh, I think uh by is very popular in my country, especially in Vietnam because a lot of people in very older age usually using buy to go to another place.

✓ Oh, uh, I think bikes are very popular in my country, especially in Vietnam, because a lot of older people usually use bikes to go to other places.

The question asks about a general situation, so the present simple is required. Use usually use, not usually using, because this describes a habitual action.

× Oh, uh, I think uh by is very popular in my country, especially in Vietnam because a lot of people in very older age usually using buy to go to another place.

✓ Oh, uh, I think bikes are very popular in my country, especially in Vietnam, because a lot of older people usually use bikes to go to other places.

Usually is normally followed by the base form of the verb when describing a repeated habit. Therefore, usually use is correct, while usually using is incorrect in this sentence.

× Oh, uh, I think uh by is very popular in my country, especially in Vietnam because a lot of people in very older age usually using buy to go to another place.

✓ Oh, uh, I think bikes are very popular in my country, especially in Vietnam, because a lot of older people usually use bikes to go to other places.

Very older age is not a natural English expression. Use older people to describe people who are advanced in age. Also, use the adjective popular after the linking verb are to describe bikes.