自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly with a complete sentence and use the past tense consistently: say “rode” instead of “ride.” The phrase “I felt from to my father” is unclear; explain that your father taught you to ride or took you to the market. Avoid stopping mid-sentence, and add one specific detail about how often you rode or how you felt.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father taught me how to ride it, and I often cycled with him to the market. I really enjoyed those trips because they gave me a sense of freedom.

建議: Give a complete answer and avoid repeating “young people.” Use a clear reason and support it with a specific example or result. Also, replace “it is a young people” with a natural expression such as “many young people enjoy cycling,” and use linking words to connect your ideas.

範例: Yes, definitely. Bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people, because they are affordable and convenient for short journeys. In addition, many people use them to exercise and avoid traffic in busy cities.

× Yes when I was a child I ride the bike because I felt from to my father going to the market around me. That's why I

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I rode a bike because I followed my father to the market nearby.

The question asks about a past experience, so the past-tense form rode must be used instead of ride. The phrase felt from to my father is not grammatically correct or clear; followed my father to the market expresses the intended meaning more naturally. Use the past tense when describing completed experiences in childhood.

× Yes when I was a child I ride the bike because I felt from to my father going to the market around me. That's why I

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I rode a bike because I followed my father to the market nearby.

The preposition sequence from to is incorrect in this context. The correct expression is followed my father to the market. Use to after a verb such as follow when indicating the destination.

× That's why I

✓ That's why I enjoyed riding a bike.

That's why I is incomplete because it does not express a complete idea. The pronoun I needs a verb, such as enjoyed, followed by the activity riding a bike. Always check that every sentence contains a subject and a complete verb phrase.

× Yes definitely I think bikes are popular in my country because it is a young people young people love this and

✓ Yes, definitely. I think bikes are popular in my country because many young people love them.

People is a plural noun, so it cannot be used with a. The phrase a young people is incorrect; use a young person for one individual or young people for more than one. The quantifier many can be used with the plural noun people.

× Yes definitely I think bikes are popular in my country because it is a young people young people love this and

✓ Yes, definitely. I think bikes are popular in my country because many young people love them.

Bikes is plural, so it should be referred to with the pronoun them, not this. Also, it does not agree with the plural noun bikes. Make sure pronouns agree with the nouns they replace in number.

× Yes definitely I think bikes are popular in my country because it is a young people young people love this and

✓ Yes, definitely. I think bikes are popular in my country because many young people love them.

The original answer contains repeated words and ends with and, leaving the sentence unfinished. It also joins ideas without a clear structure. Use a complete clause with a subject and verb, and avoid repeating the same phrase unnecessarily.