自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is grammatically correct and directly answers the question. However, it is too brief to demonstrate your speaking ability fully. Add one specific detail, such as when you got the bike, how often you used it, or what you used it for. Use a linking word such as “and” or “because” to connect the detail naturally.

範例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about seven, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

建議: You answer the question directly and provide reasons, but there are several grammar and word-choice problems. Begin the second sentence with a capital letter: “Ninety percent.” Say “ninety percent of my friends own a bike” rather than “have a bike,” and replace “the reason for buyers are popular” with “one reason bikes are popular.” Use a clear linking structure, such as “This is mainly because…,” and explain that bikes are affordable and convenient. Avoid repeating the same idea and keep the answer to three or four well-connected sentences.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. In fact, about ninety percent of my friends own one, and I have a bike too. This is mainly because bikes are affordable, convenient, and useful for traveling short distances.

× I think the reason for buyers are popular in our country because of the price.

✓ I think the reason bikes are popular in our country is the price.

The subject of the main clause is the singular noun phrase 'the reason', so the verb must be 'is', not 'are'. The sentence also needs the structure 'the reason ... is ...'. Use 'bikes' instead of 'buyers' because the topic is bike popularity.

× I think the reason for buyers are popular in our country because of the price.

✓ I think the reason bikes are popular in our country is the price.

The original sentence combines 'the reason' with 'because of' incorrectly and does not contain a complete main-clause structure. Use 'the reason ... is ...' to state the cause clearly. A natural alternative is 'I think bikes are popular in our country because they are affordable.'