自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly and avoid repeating words such as “bike.” Use the correct article and tense: say “a bike,” “when I was a child,” and “I needed” because you are talking about the past. You should also explain the contrast more clearly: your parents preferred buying you toys instead of a bicycle.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought I was too young to need one, so they bought me toys instead. As a result, I didn’t learn to ride a bike until I was much older.

建議: Your answer has a clear opinion and a relevant reason, but improve grammatical accuracy and natural phrasing. Say “Bangladesh is a densely populated country,” “bikes are easier to use for getting from one place to another,” and “people choose bikes” rather than “people chose bike.” Avoid “busy and trafficked”; “congested” or “crowded” is more natural. Add one specific supporting detail, such as bikes being affordable or useful for avoiding traffic.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in Bangladesh. Since it is a densely populated country, many roads are crowded and congested, so bicycles are a convenient way to get from one place to another. They are also relatively affordable and allow people to avoid traffic jams.

× No, I didn't have any bike bike because, uh, when I was child my parents thought, uh, I didn't need any bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike because, uh, when I was a child, my parents thought, uh, I didn't need a bike.

Bike is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article such as a. The phrase when I was child also needs the article a before child. In addition, the repeated word bike should appear only once.

× They thought I need a lot of toys.

✓ They thought I needed a lot of toys.

The main verb thought is in the past tense, so the verb in the reported idea should normally shift to the past tense as well: need becomes needed.

× Yes, bikes are popular in my country because, uh, Bangladesh is densely populated country, so most of the roads are busy and trafficked.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because, uh, Bangladesh is a densely populated country, so most of the roads are busy and trafficked.

Country is a singular countable noun, so it needs the indefinite article a. The correct phrase is a densely populated country.

× Uh, bike are easier to move one place to another place.

✓ Uh, bikes are easier to use to move from one place to another.

The sentence refers to bikes in general, so the plural form bikes is needed instead of the singular form bike.

× Uh, bike are easier to move one place to another place.

✓ Uh, bikes are easier to use to move from one place to another.

The plural subject bikes must be followed by the plural verb are. Bike are is incorrect because a singular subject would require is.

× Uh, bike are easier to move one place to another place.

✓ Uh, bikes are easier to use to move from one place to another.

When describing movement between two locations, use from before the starting point and to before the destination: from one place to another.

× That's why, uh, I think people chose uh, bike.

✓ That's why, uh, I think people choose bikes.

The answer describes a general opinion about what people usually do, so the present-tense verb choose is appropriate. Chose is the past-tense form and does not fit this general statement.

× That's why, uh, I think people chose uh, bike.

✓ That's why, uh, I think people choose bikes.

The sentence refers to bikes in general, so the plural noun bikes is more appropriate than the singular noun bike.