自行车— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
考生
Did you have a bike when you were shy?
考官
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
考生
Yes I do, I think bikes are popular in my country. Once I was child, I see everybody has a bike. They used to They use it to travel everywhere that they want to go a temple or everywhere.
評估
總分
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
分數: 20.0建議: คำตอบนี้ไม่ได้ตอบคำถามของผู้สอบ เพราะคุณเข้าใจคำว่า “child” ผิดเป็น “shy” ควรตอบโดยตรงว่าคุณมีจักรยานหรือไม่ในวัยเด็ก แล้วอาจเพิ่มรายละเอียดสั้น ๆ เช่น จักรยานมีสีอะไร ใช้ทำอะไร หรือใครเป็นคนซื้อให้ หากไม่แน่ใจว่าฟังคำถามถูกต้อง ให้ขอให้ผู้สอบพูดซ้ำอย่างสุภาพ เช่น “Sorry, could you repeat the question?”
範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was small and blue, and my parents bought it for me when I was about seven. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
分數: 55.0建議: คุณตอบตรงคำถามและมีความพยายามให้เหตุผล แต่ควรแก้ไวยากรณ์และลดการพูดซ้ำ เช่น “Once I was child” ควรเป็น “When I was a child” และ “I see” ควรเป็น “I saw” นอกจากนี้ “They used to They use it” ซ้ำกัน ควรเลือกใช้เพียง “They used to use them” หรือ “They used them” ควรจัดคำตอบให้ชัดเจนด้วยโครงสร้างความคิดเห็น + เหตุผล + ตัวอย่าง และใช้คำเชื่อม เช่น “because” และ “For example” รวมถึงใช้ “ride bikes” แทน “use bikes” ในบริบทการขี่จักรยาน
範例: Yes, I do. Bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short journeys. When I was a child, many people used to ride bikes to school, local shops, and nearby temples. For example, I often cycled around my neighborhood with my friends.
文法
× Once I was child, I see everybody has a bike.
✓ Once I was a child, I saw everybody had a bike.
The singular countable noun child requires the indefinite article a. Also, because the sentence describes a past situation, see should be changed to saw, and has should be changed to had to keep the past-time context consistent.
× Once I was child, I see everybody has a bike.
✓ Once I was a child, I saw everybody had a bike.
The phrase Once I was a child refers to the past, so the verbs should also be in the past tense: see becomes saw and has becomes had.
× They used to They use it to travel everywhere that they want to go a temple or everywhere.
✓ They used to use it to travel everywhere they wanted to go, such as to a temple or other places.
The sentence contains a repeated and incorrectly connected verb phrase: used to They use. Use used to followed by the base verb use. The sentence is also clearer when the examples are introduced with such as.
× They used to They use it to travel everywhere that they want to go a temple or everywhere.
✓ They used to use it to travel everywhere they wanted to go, such as to a temple or other places.
The preposition to is needed before a destination: go to a temple. Use go to when describing movement toward a place.
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