自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlamanız ve çocukluk deneyiminizden bahsetmeniz olumlu. Ancak zaman uyumu konusunda hatalar var: geçmişteki olaylar için “had”, “learned” ve “helped” kullanılmalı; “we have learned” yerine “we learned” denmeli. “How can I ride a bike” ifadesi bu bağlamda doğal değil; “he taught me how to ride a bike” demelisiniz. Ayrıca “nowadays I couldn't ride a bike because I don't have” cümlesi tamamlanmamış ve anlam olarak belirsiz. “I can’t ride one nowadays because I don’t own a bike” şeklinde tamamlayabilirsiniz. Gereksiz duraksamaları azaltıp cevabı net bir konu cümlesi ve bir destekleyici ayrıntıyla yapılandırın.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I learned to ride it with my brother. He often helped me and taught me how to balance. I don’t ride nowadays because I don’t own a bike anymore.

建議: Cevap, soruya doğrudan “Yes, they are” veya “No, they aren’t” şeklinde başlamalı. “Here’s of course”, “because of this consequences” ve “in this station” ifadeleri doğal veya doğru değil; muhtemelen “Yes, of course”, “because of these circumstances” ve “in this situation” demek istediniz. Formula 1 yarışları ile bisiklet kullanımının arasındaki bağlantı açık değil; bunun yerine bisikletlerin neden popüler olduğunu (trafik, çevre bilinci, ulaşım maliyeti veya spor) açıklayın. Ayrıca tek ve anlaşılır bir ana fikir verip “because” veya “for example” gibi bağlayıcılarla kısa bir destekleyici ayrıntı ekleyin.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people. Many people use them because they are affordable and help them avoid heavy traffic. For example, some commuters cycle to work instead of taking a car or a bus.

× Yes, when I was a child I had a bike with my brother and we have learned it together.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had a bike, and my brother and I learned to ride it together.

The question asks about a past experience, so the past simple learned is needed instead of the present perfect have learned. Also, learned to ride it is the grammatically correct expression for acquiring the skill of riding a bike.

× Sometimes my brother helped me and how can I uh, ride a bike umm, but nowadays I couldn't uh ride a bike because I don't have.

✓ Sometimes my brother helped me learn how to ride a bike, but nowadays I cannot ride a bike because I do not have one.

Cannot is required because the student is describing a present inability. Could not or couldn't refers to past inability. The sentence also needs one after have because the object, a bike, must be specified or replaced by the pronoun one.

× Sometimes my brother helped me and how can I uh, ride a bike umm, but nowadays I couldn't uh ride a bike because I don't have.

✓ Sometimes my brother helped me learn how to ride a bike, but nowadays I cannot ride a bike because I do not have one.

The phrase how can I ride a bike is not correctly integrated into the sentence. After helped me, use the verb learn, followed by how to ride a bike. The final clause also needs an object after have, so have one is complete.

× Here's of course especially when Formula One and other races happened in my country because of this consequences we face a lot of challenges and in this station people turn to bicycles and scooters.

✓ Yes, of course, bikes are especially popular when Formula One and other races happen in my country. Because of these events, people turn to bicycles and scooters in this situation.

The question asks about a general situation in the present, so happen is more appropriate than the past-tense form happened. The answer also needs a complete main clause, such as bikes are especially popular.

× Here's of course especially when Formula One and other races happened in my country because of this consequences we face a lot of challenges and in this station people turn to bicycles and scooters.

✓ Yes, of course, bikes are especially popular when Formula One and other races happen in my country. Because of these events, people turn to bicycles and scooters in this situation.

The plural noun events requires the plural demonstrative these, not the singular form this. Use this with one singular noun and these with more than one noun.