自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly, but avoid repeating the examiner’s wording. Add one specific supporting detail, such as when you received the bike, how often you used it, or what you enjoyed about it. This will make the response more natural and developed while remaining concise.

範例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about eight, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

建議: Use the correct expression “I think so” instead of “I think yes,” and say “ride bikes” rather than “write it.” Improve the sentence structure by explaining that people ride bikes to work because they are affordable and help reduce transportation costs. Avoid repetition and include a clear linking word such as “because” or “also.”

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among office workers. Many people ride them to work because they are affordable and help reduce transportation costs. They are also a convenient way to avoid traffic.

× I think yes because many employees are writing it specially when going to their work and they love because it makes it minimize the the cost for a fare.

✓ I think so because many employees are riding bikes, especially when going to work, and they love it because it helps minimize the cost of fares.

The phrase going to work is the standard expression when referring to one's workplace or regular job; their work is unnecessary here. Also, cost of fares is more appropriate than cost for a fare because of commonly takes the noun that specifies what the cost relates to.

× I think yes because many employees are writing it specially when going to their work and they love because it makes it minimize the the cost for a fare.

✓ I think so because many employees are riding bikes, especially when going to work, and they love it because it helps minimize the cost of fares.

The verb love needs an object in this sentence. The pronoun it refers to riding bikes or using bikes, so the sentence should say they love it.

× I think yes because many employees are writing it specially when going to their work and they love because it makes it minimize the the cost for a fare.

✓ I think so because many employees are riding bikes, especially when going to work, and they love it because it helps minimize the cost of fares.

The definite article the is repeated in the phrase the the cost. Only one the should be used: the cost.

× I think yes because many employees are writing it specially when going to their work and they love because it makes it minimize the the cost for a fare.

✓ I think so because many employees are riding bikes, especially when going to work, and they love it because it helps minimize the cost of fares.

The structure makes it minimize is incorrect in this context. The verb help can be followed by an object and the base form of a verb: helps minimize. The sentence also needs it after love to make the meaning complete. Additionally, riding bikes is the appropriate expression for using bicycles, while writing means producing written words.