自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer the question directly and use the correct word “bicycles” or “bikes,” not “tubulars.” Avoid repeated or incorrect phrases such as “and and” and “didn't buy me bought me.” Also, say “worried that I might have an accident” rather than “worried about causing accidents.” A clear topic sentence followed by one specific reason would sound more natural and effective.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents were worried that I might have an accident, so they decided not to buy me one. I usually walked to school instead.

建議: Give a direct answer first, then explain one or two reasons in a logical order. Correct the grammar in “two-wheelers help,” “most students,” and “an affordable means of transportation.” Avoid repetition such as “very timely very earlier” and “in my country” appearing twice. Use linking words such as “because” and “also,” and make the details more specific by mentioning traffic, cost, or convenience.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and young workers. They are affordable and convenient, and they can help people avoid heavy traffic. Many students ride to university because it saves both time and money.

× They didn't buy me bought me any bike.

✓ They didn't buy me a bike.

After the auxiliary verb did not (didn't), use the base form of the main verb: buy, not bought. Also, a singular countable noun such as bike requires the article a.

× They didn't buy me bought me any bike.

✓ They didn't buy me a bike.

Bike is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a bike when referring to one nonspecific bike.

× The two wheelers helps the most of the student to reach their university.

✓ Two-wheelers help most students reach their universities.

The plural subject two-wheelers requires the plural verb help, not helps. The plural noun students is needed because the sentence refers to students in general, and their universities agrees with the plural subject.

× The two wheelers helps the most of the student to reach their university.

✓ Two-wheelers help most students reach their universities.

The expression the most of the student is incorrect here. Use most students when referring generally to a large proportion of students.

× The two wheelers helps the most of the student to reach their university very timely very earlier.

✓ Two-wheelers help most students reach their universities earlier, which saves them time.

The adverbs very timely very earlier are incorrectly placed and unnecessarily repeated. Earlier should be placed after reach their universities, and the natural expression is saves them time, not saves their time.

× The two wheelers helps the most of the student to reach their university very timely very earlier.

✓ Two-wheelers help most students reach their universities earlier, which saves them time.

Timely does not naturally describe how quickly someone reaches a destination, and very earlier is not correct in this context. Use earlier to make the intended comparison with the usual travel time.

× In my country the bikes are most affordable means of transportation.

✓ In my country, bikes are the most affordable means of transportation.

The superlative phrase most affordable normally requires the definite article the. The comma after In my country also separates the introductory phrase from the main clause.

× In my country the bikes are most affordable means of transportation.

✓ In my country, bikes are the most affordable means of transportation.

When comparing bikes with all other forms of transportation, use the superlative form the most affordable, not most affordable without the article.

× In my country the bikes are most affordable means of transportation, so it is popular in our country.

✓ In my country, bikes are the most affordable means of transportation, so they are popular there.

Use the definite article the before the superlative phrase the most affordable. However, when speaking about bikes in general, omit the before the plural noun bikes.

× In my country the bikes are most affordable means of transportation, so it is popular in our country.

✓ In my country, bikes are the most affordable means of transportation, so they are popular there.

The pronoun it is singular, but its antecedent bikes is plural. Use they to refer to bikes. The pronoun there avoids unnecessarily repeating in our country.