自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer the question directly using the past tense: “No, I didn’t.” Avoid saying “because I am good,” which does not clearly explain your answer. Use “an Activa” or “a scooter” instead of “Activa,” and explain that it was convenient for going to school. Add one specific detail, such as how long the journey took or who usually took you.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family had an Activa scooter, so I usually used it to go to school because it was more convenient. It took me about fifteen minutes to get there.

建議: Give a clear answer first: “Yes, bikes are very popular in my country.” Replace unclear phrases such as “weigh through” and “emergency problem” with precise language, such as “travel through traffic” and “reach hospitals quickly.” Use one linking word, such as “because” or “for example,” rather than repeating “because.” Support your opinion with specific reasons, such as affordability, convenience, and fuel efficiency.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in busy cities. They are affordable, use less fuel, and can move through traffic more easily than cars. For example, many people use them to commute to work, go to school, or reach a hospital quickly.

× No I don't have bike because I am good.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike because I was good.

The question asks about the speaker's childhood, so the past tense is required. Use didn't have instead of don't have and was instead of am.

× No I don't have bike because I am good.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike because I was good.

The singular countable noun bike needs the indefinite article a. Say a bike, not bike.

× I have Activa because when I go school sometime it's easy to go to school with properly.

✓ I had an Activa because, when I went to school, it was sometimes easier to go there.

The answer refers to the speaker's past experience, so the past tense is needed: had, went, and was.

× I have Activa because when I go school sometime it's easy to go to school with properly.

✓ I had an Activa because, when I went to school, it was sometimes easier to go there.

The preposition to is required before school when describing movement: go to school. The phrase go to school with properly is incorrect, so it is replaced with go there.

× I have Activa because when I go school sometime it's easy to go to school with properly.

✓ I had an Activa because, when I went to school, it was sometimes easier to go there.

Properly does not fit the meaning or structure of this sentence. Use an adverb such as sometimes to describe frequency, and avoid adding properly after go there.

× I have Activa because when I go school sometime it's easy to go to school with properly.

✓ I had an Activa because, when I went to school, it was sometimes easier to go there.

Activa is a singular countable noun in this sentence, so it needs an article. Use an Activa.

× Yes, I think that bikes are most popular in my country because bikes are very easy to weigh through their school, hospital and emergency problem.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are the most popular form of transportation in my country because they are convenient for going to school or the hospital and for dealing with emergencies.

The superlative most popular normally needs the definite article the when referring to the highest degree in a group: the most popular. Adding form of transportation also makes the comparison clear.

× Yes, I think that bikes are most popular in my country because bikes are very easy to weigh through their school, hospital and emergency problem.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are the most popular form of transportation in my country because they are convenient for going to school or the hospital and for dealing with emergencies.

The pronoun their incorrectly suggests that the bikes have a school, hospital, or emergency problem. Use they to refer to bikes, and use clear phrases such as going to school and dealing with emergencies.

× Yes, I think that bikes are most popular in my country because bikes are very easy to weigh through their school, hospital and emergency problem.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are the most popular form of transportation in my country because they are convenient for going to school or the hospital and for dealing with emergencies.

The phrase weigh through is not an appropriate expression here. Use for going to school, to the hospital, and for dealing with emergencies to show the purposes for which bikes are useful.

× Yes, I think that bikes are most popular in my country because bikes are very easy to weigh through their school, hospital and emergency problem.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are the most popular form of transportation in my country because they are convenient for going to school or the hospital and for dealing with emergencies.

Emergencies should be plural because the speaker is referring generally to different emergency situations. The singular phrase emergency problem is unnatural in this context.

× Because it is my own view that is.

✓ That is my own view.

The original sentence has an unnatural and incomplete structure. That is my own view is a complete and natural sentence for expressing a personal opinion.