自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答基本切题，但语法和表达不自然。应使用完整句子，例如“I didn’t have a bike when I was a child.”另外，题目询问过去的经历，而“that’s my dream”表达的是现在的愿望，逻辑不够清楚。建议先直接回答，再补充具体原因或愿望，并使用连接词使内容更连贯。

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought it was unsafe for me to ride on the busy roads. However, I’ve always wanted one, so I’m thinking of buying a bike in the future.

建議: 回答语法正确，也直接回应了问题，但内容过于简单，只重复了题目中的关键词，缺少原因和具体细节。建议说明自行车为什么受欢迎，例如环保、方便、价格低，或举出具体场景；可以使用“because”“especially”等连接和补充表达。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who live in big cities. They are affordable and convenient for short trips, and they also help reduce traffic pollution. Many people use shared bikes to travel to work or school.

× I didn't that's my dream.

✓ I didn't, but having a bike was my dream.

原句把两个完整的意思直接连接在一起，中间缺少连接词和适当的标点，导致句子结构不完整。可以使用“but”连接两个表示转折的分句。由于问题询问的是童年经历，使用过去时“was”更符合语境。建议回答时注意在两个完整分句之间使用连接词，如“but”，并根据时间背景选择合适的时态。