自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly, then add one or two specific details. Correct the verb forms: use “I played with it” instead of “I have playing with it” and “I spent” instead of “I spend” because you are talking about the past. Avoid repeating “bike” by using “it” or “cycling,” and connect your ideas with a linking word such as “because” or “so.”

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often played with it after school, and I spent a lot of time cycling around my neighborhood. It was a great way to have fun and stay active.

建議: Give a complete answer with a clear reason and avoid unnecessary repetition such as “from my point of view, I think” and “also, I think that also.” Use the present simple for general popularity: “Bikes are quite popular.” When describing your childhood, say “I started riding a bike when I was three” rather than “I had started to ride a bike since three years old.” Finish your answer with a specific supporting detail, such as where people ride or why they use bikes.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in Albania, especially among children and young adults. I started riding a bike when I was three years old, and I often cycled around my neighborhood. Many people enjoy cycling because it is inexpensive, healthy, and environmentally friendly.

× I have playing with it.

✓ I played with it.

The question asks about your childhood, so you should use the simple past tense. Have playing is grammatically incorrect here. Use played to describe a completed activity in the past.

× I spend a lot of time outside with a bike.

✓ I spent a lot of time outside with my bike.

Because you are talking about your childhood, spend must be changed to the simple past form spent. My bike is more specific and natural when referring to your own bike.

× I think that also me, I had started to ride a bike.

✓ I also think that I started riding a bike.

Me is an object pronoun and cannot be used as the subject of the clause. Use I as the subject. Also should be placed before the main verb or after the subject and auxiliary verb.

× I had started to ride a bike since three years old.

✓ I started riding a bike when I was three years old.

The past perfect had started is unnecessary because there is no other past event to compare it with. Use the simple past started for a past event. Use when I was three years old to express your age at that time.

× I had started to ride a bike since three years old.

✓ I started riding a bike when I was three years old.

Since is used with a starting point that continues until another time, such as since 2020. To describe your age at the time an event happened, use when I was three years old.

× and when I was

✓ I started riding a bike when I was three years old.

And when I was is an incomplete clause because it does not state your age or complete the idea. A complete sentence needs a clear subject, verb, and complete meaning. Finish the clause with three years old.