自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答基本切题，但有较多语法、搭配和表达不自然的问题。应使用过去时，例如“didn’t have”和“was”；“arranged like activity classes”应改为“arranged activities/classes”， “tend to be take part in”应改为“tended to take part in”。最后一句“so I don't have goodbye to practice”意思不清，可以直接说“so I didn’t have much time to ride a bike”。建议采用“直接回答+原因+具体例子”的结构，并减少“like”等口语填充词。

範例: Not really. I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my parents arranged various activities for me at weekends. For example, I usually attended piano and singing classes, so I didn’t have much time to ride a bike.

建議: 回答没有清楚地表明自行车在中国是否流行，开头的“Not really”与后面“very essential transportation”存在矛盾。应先给出明确观点，例如“是的，尤其在大学校园和大城市很常见”，然后补充原因和具体场景。“bike”在泛指时应使用复数“bikes”，“essential transportation”可改为“a convenient means of transportation”。避免说“I never thought this question”或“I don’t have advice”，这些表达不能有效回答问题。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in China, especially on university campuses. They are a convenient and affordable means of transportation, so many students use them to get to class or move around campus. Shared bikes are also common in big cities.

× Not really, I don't have a bike when I were a child because my parents arranged like activity classes for my weekends.

✓ Not really. I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents arranged activity classes for my weekends.

“when I were a child”描述的是过去的童年经历，所以要使用一般过去时。主语“I”搭配be动词过去式“was”，不能用“were”；“don't have”也应改为“didn't have”。

× I always just tend to be take part in like a piano class and the singing so I don't have goodbye to practice.

✓ I always tended to take part in a piano class and singing, so I didn't have time to practice.

“tend to”后面应接动词原形，因此应说“tend to take”，不能说“tend to be take”。如果使用“be”，则必须说“be taking”。此外，这段内容讲的是童年经历，所以使用过去式“tended”。

× I always just tend to be take part in like a piano class and the singing so I don't have goodbye to practice.

✓ I always tended to take part in a piano class and singing, so I didn't have time to practice.

整段是在描述过去的周末安排，因此“don't have”应改为一般过去时“didn't have”。“goodbye”不是表示练习时间的正确词语；这里应使用“time”。

× Not really, I never thought this question.

✓ Not really. I never thought about this question before.

表示“思考某个问题”时，动词“think”后面通常要接介词“about”，所以应说“think about this question”，不能直接说“think this question”。

× I think bike is very essential transportation on campus especially in China so.

✓ I think bikes are essential transportation on campus, especially in China.

这里是在泛指自行车这一类交通工具，所以应使用复数“bikes”。复数主语“bikes”也要搭配复数动词“are”。

× I think bike is very essential transportation on campus especially in China so.

✓ I think a bike is an essential means of transportation on campus, especially in China.

单数可数名词“bike”前面需要冠词，因此应说“a bike”。表达“一个重要的交通方式”时，应说“an essential means of transportation”；“essential”以元音音素开头，所以使用“an”。

× But I don't have advice or I just know a little about bikes.

✓ But I don't have any advice, and I just know a little about bikes.

这里是在并列表达两个相关情况，而不是在两者之间做选择，所以应使用表示并列的连词“and”，不能使用“or”。在否定句中，“any advice”比“advice”更自然。