自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer the question directly with a clear topic sentence: “Yes, I had a bike.” Then explain why you used it. Correct the verb tense by using “had,” not “have,” and use “ride a bike” rather than “bite.” Avoid repeated words such as “I like to like” and finish with a complete sentence. You could also say “my mother didn’t have time to take me to school” instead of “my mom no time to pick up me.”

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it to school because my mother didn’t have time to take me. It was a convenient and enjoyable way to get around.

建議: State your opinion clearly and support it with two specific reasons. Use “It is dangerous to ride a bike” rather than “dangerous for ride a bike,” and say “the weather is quite hot,” not “very weather is very quiet hot.” Replace “write to drive” with “prefer to drive.” Use a linking word such as “because” or “therefore” to connect your ideas, and avoid the contradictory phrase “No, I don’t think so. I disagree.”

範例: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. This is because cycling can be dangerous due to heavy traffic, and the weather is usually quite hot. Therefore, many people prefer to drive cars instead of riding bikes.

× When I was young, I have I had one bicep because I like to like the bite to the school.

✓ When I was young, I had one bicycle because I liked riding it to school.

The question asks about a past situation, so use the simple past tense: had and liked, not have and like. Use the past form riding after liked when describing the activity. Also, bicycle is the correct noun, and the preposition to is used before school in this context.

× When I was young, I have I had one bicep because I like to like the bite to the school.

✓ When I was young, I had one bicycle because I liked riding it to school.

After liked, use a gerund with -ing when referring to an activity: liked riding. Do not use the incorrect combination like to like.

× because I like to like the bite to the school

✓ because I liked riding it to school

The correct preposition for movement toward a school is to. The phrase to the school can be grammatical when referring to a specific school, but to school is more natural when talking about attending school generally.

× my mom no time to pick up me and send me to the school

✓ My mom had no time to pick me up and take me to school.

Because the situation happened in the past, use had instead of no time. The verb take should also be in the past form to match the past context. The natural word order is pick me up, not pick up me.

× my mom no time to pick up me

✓ My mom had no time to pick me up.

When the pronoun is the object of a phrasal verb, it must come between the verb and the particle: pick me up, not pick up me.

× When I was young, I have I had one bicep because I like to like the bite to the school my mom no time to pick up me and send me to the school I can.

✓ When I was young, I had one bicycle because I liked riding it to school. My mom had no time to pick me up and take me to school.

The original answer contains several incomplete and joined clauses, making the sentence difficult to understand. Divide the ideas into two complete sentences, each with a clear subject and verb.

× my country is very dangerous for ride a bike

✓ It is very dangerous to ride a bike in my country.

Use in to indicate the country where the activity takes place. The natural structure is dangerous to ride, not dangerous for ride.

× and very weather is very quiet hot

✓ and the weather is very hot

Use the definite article the before weather when referring to the weather in a particular country or place. Quiet does not describe temperature, so it should be removed.

× very weather is very quiet hot

✓ the weather is very hot

Hot is the correct adjective for describing high temperature. Quiet describes a lack of noise and cannot be used to describe temperature.

× So many people write to drive a car more than a bike.

✓ Therefore, many people prefer to drive cars rather than ride bikes.

When speaking about cars and bikes in general, use the plural forms cars and bikes. The original nouns should not be treated as singular examples in this general statement.

× No I don't think so. I disagree because my country is very dangerous for ride a bike and very weather is very quiet hot. So many people write to drive a car more than a bike.

✓ No, I do not think so. I disagree because it is very dangerous to ride a bike in my country, and the weather is very hot. Therefore, many people prefer to drive cars rather than ride bikes.

The original answer contains incomplete structures and an unclear final clause. Use it is as the subject of the statement about danger, and connect the ideas with clear sentence structures. Use Therefore to show the result.