自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答基本切题，但时态、代词和搭配错误较多，影响自然度和准确性。应使用过去时，因为问题问的是童年经历：将“have”改为“had”，“buy”改为“bought”，“give”改为“gave”；提到母亲时用“she”，而不是“he”。“practice the skill about support”表达不自然，可以改为“help me improve my cycling skills”或“encourage me to exercise”。建议先直接回答，再补充买车的原因，控制在2—3句。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mother bought it for me because she wanted to encourage me to exercise and improve my cycling skills. I really enjoyed riding it around my neighborhood.

建議: 回答提到了中国共享单车，但句子结构混乱，且没有清楚说明“自行车为什么受欢迎”。应先给出明确观点，例如“Bikes are very popular in China”，然后用“especially”或“because”补充共享单车的具体原因，如价格低、使用方便、适合短途出行。“a single shared bike”应改为“bike-sharing services”或“shared bikes”；不要把共享单车、支付宝和铁路直接并列，除非说明它们共同体现了中国的便利和创新。

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in China, especially in big cities. Bike-sharing services are convenient and affordable, so people often use them for short trips or to get to a subway station. They are also a greener alternative to driving.

× I have a bike.

✓ I had a bike.

问题发生在童年时期，应该使用一般过去时。将现在时 have 改为过去时 had。

× it's buy from my mother.

✓ It was bought by my mother.

自行车是“被母亲买的”，需要使用被动语态：was + 过去分词。buy 的过去分词是 bought，不能使用 buy。

× it's buy from my mother.

✓ It was bought by my mother.

在被动语态中，动词必须使用过去分词。buy 的过去分词是 bought。

× He want to practice the skill about support.

✓ She wanted to practice supporting skills.

前文提到的是 mother，所以应该使用女性代词 She，而不是 He。使用代词时要注意与所指的人保持一致。

× He want to practice the skill about support.

✓ She wanted to practice supporting skills.

整个回答描述的是过去发生的事情，因此 want 应改为一般过去时 wanted。

× the skill about support

✓ supporting skills

skill about support 的搭配不自然。这里可以使用 supporting skills，表示“支持方面的技能”。学习词组时应注意介词与名词、动词的固定搭配。

× so he give me a bike to improve my sports skills.

✓ so she gave me a bike to improve my sports skills.

故事发生在过去，give 应改为过去式 gave。同时，根据前文，he 应改为 she。

× so he give me a bike to improve my sports skills.

✓ so she gave me a bike to improve my sports skills.

这里的代词指代 mother，因此应使用 she，而不是 he。

× we have a single shared bike

✓ we have shared bikes

句子讨论的是中国的共享单车这一类事物，而不是一辆单独的自行车，所以应使用复数 shared bikes。复数名词前通常不使用 a。

× in China we have a single shared bike is alongside with Alipay online shopping and railways Always code for great innovations.

✓ In China, shared bikes, along with Alipay, online shopping, and railways, are always considered great innovations.

原句把 we have、is 和后面的短语错误地连接在一起，导致句子结构不完整且混乱。可以使用一个完整结构：主语 shared bikes + be 动词 are + 补语 considered great innovations。

× is alongside with Alipay online shopping and railways

✓ alongside Alipay, online shopping, and railways

alongside 本身已经表示“与……一起、和……并列”，通常不需要再加 with。因此应使用 alongside Alipay，而不是 alongside with Alipay。

× a single shared bike is alongside with Alipay online shopping and railways

✓ shared bikes, along with Alipay, online shopping, and railways, are always considered great innovations.

主语 shared bikes 是复数，所以 be 动词应使用 are，而不是 is。主语和谓语动词必须保持单复数一致。

× Always code for great innovations.

✓ are always considered great innovations.

这里想表达“被认为是伟大的创新”，应使用被动语态 are considered。注意频率副词 always 通常放在 be 动词之后、过去分词之前。