自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise, correct tense consistency and avoid contradiction. Start with a clear topic sentence (yes/no), then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Fix grammar: use past tense for childhood possession, and clarify current situation. Limit to 3–4 sentences.

範例: Yes. I had a bike when I was a child and I spent a lot of time riding it around my neighborhood. Because I enjoyed riding, I often went to the park with friends on weekends. However, I don’t own a bike now because I moved to a city where I use public transport instead.

建議: Organize the answer with a clear opinion, then provide two specific reasons linked with connectors. Use correct phrasing (e.g., 'use bikes for commuting') and avoid vague phrases like 'the program' without explanation. Keep sentences short and coherent.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Firstly, many people use bicycles to commute because traffic is often heavy and cycling is faster for short distances. Secondly, there are bike-sharing schemes in many cities, which makes it easy and affordable to hire a bike when needed.

× I used to have a bike in my childhood.

✓ I used to have a bike when I was a child.

The phrase 'in my childhood' is not incorrect but 'when I was a child' is the more natural collocation in spoken English. Use 'used to' for past habits; keep the time expression 'when I was a child' to match that tense.

× I love to spend time with my bike.

✓ I loved spending time on my bike.

The student is describing a past habit linked to 'used to', so the verb should be in the past: 'loved' or 'used to love'. Also, collocation is 'spend time on a bike' rather than 'with my bike'. Use the gerund 'spending' after verbs of like in this context for natural phrasing.

× But no, unfortunately I don't have a bike.

✓ But no, unfortunately I don't have a bike now.

The original sentence is grammatically acceptable, but adding 'now' clarifies the contrast with the past. Ensure present simple 'don't have' is used for current states.

× I think bikes are quite popular in my country because of the heavy traffic people choose spending time or getting their jobs with bikes and there are lots of bikes in the city and you can easily get with the help of the program.

✓ I think bikes are quite popular in my country because of the heavy traffic; people choose to commute to work by bike, and there are lots of bikes available in the city that you can rent through a program.

This sentence had multiple issues: run-on sentence and incorrect verb patterns. Use a semicolon or split into clauses to avoid a run-on. 'Choose spending time or getting their jobs with bikes' is ungrammatical; correct form is 'choose to commute to work by bike' where 'choose to + infinitive' is required. Use 'by bike' for transport preposition. 'You can easily get with the help of the program' is vague—'rent through a program' is clearer. Also use plural agreement and appropriate articles where needed.