自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer does not respond to the question. It should directly state whether you had a bike, provide a brief supporting detail, and use linking words if adding more information. Keep responses natural, relevant and no more than five sentences. Specifically: 1) Begin with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + brief context). 2) Add one or two specific supporting details (e.g., who you rode with, how often, memories). 3) Use a linking word if you add extra information (e.g., "also", "however").

範例: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it to school and around my neighbourhood almost every day. Also, I often rode with my older brother, which helped me become more confident on the road.

建議: Your answer is off-topic and repeats unrelated information. To improve, answer the question directly with a clear opinion, then support it with specific reasons or examples. Use linking words (for example, "because", "for instance", "however") and keep it concise (maximum five sentences).

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. For example, many people use bicycles for short trips to work or the market because they are cheap and convenient. However, in big cities cycling is less common due to heavy traffic and limited bike lanes.

× I live in a small city near the sea. I enjoy reading books and walking in the park with my friends. Learning English helps me meet new people and understand different cultures.

✓ When I was a child, I lived in a small city near the sea. I enjoyed reading books and walking in the park with my friends. Learning English helped me meet new people and understand different cultures.

The examiner's question asks about the past (childhood), so the student used present tense 'live/enjoy/helps' which is inconsistent with the time frame. This is a sentence structure and tense error (past vs present). Change verbs to past tense ('lived', 'enjoyed', 'helped') and add a time phrase 'When I was a child' to make the temporal reference explicit and the sentences coherent. Suggestion: identify the time frame in the question and adjust verb tenses accordingly.

× I live in a small city near the sea. I enjoy reading books and walking in the park with my friends. Learning English helps me meet new people and understand different cultures.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country. I live in a small city near the sea. I enjoy reading books and walking in the park with my friends. Learning English helps me meet new people and understand different cultures.

The examiner asked about the popularity of bikes; the student repeated unrelated personal information instead of answering the question. This is a sentence structure and relevance issue. Provide a direct response to the question first ('Yes, bikes are popular...') and then add personal details if needed. Keep tense consistent: because this question is general, present simple ('are popular') is appropriate. Suggestion: answer the question directly, then add supporting sentences that are relevant and maintain correct tense.