自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答没有直接回应问题，只是重复了考官的话。应直接给出主题句并补充一两句具体细节（例如什么时候有、什么样的自行车、是否常骑、和谁一起骑等）。使用连词使回答连贯，控制在最多5句内。

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about seven, and I used to ride it to the park near my home almost every day. My father taught me to balance and ride, and I often raced with my neighbors after school.

建議: 回答总体有方向，但语言不够流畅，有犹豫词（uh），语法有小错误（比较级结构）。应更自然地表达变化原因并给出具体例子或比较，使用连接词增加连贯性，控制在最多5句。

範例: They were more popular about ten years ago, but not so much now because public transport has improved a lot in my city. For example, new metro lines and frequent buses make commuting easier, so fewer people choose bicycles for daily travel.

× It was popular 10 years ago, but nowadays uh public transport is very available in my city. So not popular uh than 10 years ago.

✓ Bikes were popular 10 years ago, but nowadays public transport is very available in my city, so they are not as popular as they were 10 years ago.

错误类型：过去时和比较结构使用不当。说明：1) “It was popular 10 years ago” 中的主语应为复数“Bikes”，因为前文讨论的是“bikes”（自行车的复数）。因此动词应使用过去式“were”。2) “So not popular uh than 10 years ago” 语序和比较结构不正确。正确的比较结构是“not as ... as”或“less ... than”。建议改为“they are not as popular as they were 10 years ago”以保持时态一致并明确比较对象。3) “nowadays uh public transport is very available” 中“very available”搭配不自然，可保留但更自然的表达是“public transport is very convenient/accessible/available”。改进建议：使用与主语一致的数（单复数），在比较句中采用固定结构“not as ... as”或“less ... than”，并使用更自然的形容词搭配（例如accessible或convenient）。