自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ответ слишком короткий и содержит грамматическую ошибку времени. Надо отвечать прямо и развивать ответ одной-двумя дополнительными деталями: когда вы получили велосипед, как часто ездили и почему он был важен. Используйте правильное прошедшее время и связки (for example, when, because, often).

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it as a birthday present when I was eight and I rode it almost every day after school. For example, I often cycled to my friend's house nearby and sometimes used it to go to the park.

建議: Фраза неграмотна и неестественна: неправильный артикль и неоправданное окончание предложения. Нужно дать чёткое мнение, поддержанное конкретной причиной и, по возможности, противопоставлением. Используйте связки (because, although, however, for instance) и точные слова (popular, common, prefer to drive).

範例: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because most people prefer to drive cars due to long distances and limited cycling infrastructure. However, they are becoming more common in some cities where bike lanes are being built.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense. Use 'had' to indicate possession in the past. Suggestion: match the verb tense to the time reference in the question (use past simple for completed past situations).

× I think a bike in my country is not popular transport because people often drive in.

✓ I don’t think bikes are a popular form of transport in my country because people often drive cars.

Multiple issues: tense/aspect and article/word choice. The student began with 'I think' (present), which is acceptable for a general opinion, but the rest of the sentence uses singular 'a bike' and omits necessary articles and nouns. Correct structure for general statements uses plural 'bikes' or 'a bike' with clear context. Also 'popular transport' needs an article or phrase 'a popular form of transport' and 'drive in' is incomplete; it should be 'drive cars' or 'use cars'. Suggestion: use 'I don’t think' for negative opinion or 'I think bikes are not' but more natural is 'I don’t think bikes are a popular form of transport in my country because people often drive cars.'