自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời quá ngắn và không trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng (Yes/No + ngắn gọn), sau đó thêm 1-2 câu chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: ai tặng, bạn dùng thế nào, bạn đã đi bao lâu). Tránh từ không đúng ngữ cảnh như “Account”. Giữ tối đa 5 câu, dùng liên từ khi cần để mạch lạc.

範例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. My parents bought it for me on my seventh birthday, and I used it to ride to school and play with friends. I remember practicing every afternoon until I felt confident riding on busy streets.

建議: Câu trả lời có ý nhưng thiếu rõ ràng, ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: “I like when you ride in the ride a vehicle”). Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp rồi cung cấp lý do cụ thể, dùng liên từ để liên kết ý và tránh lặp từ. Thêm chi tiết cụ thể (nơi thấy nhiều xe đạp, ai dùng, mục đích) để tăng tính thuyết phục. Giữ 2–4 câu, chú ý ngữ pháp cơ bản và thứ tự từ.

範例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country. For example, many people use them for short trips to the market or school, especially in crowded urban areas. Moreover, they are an affordable and convenient option for daily commuting, which is why you often see lots of riders on the streets.

× Account.

✓ I don't understand the question.

The student responded with a single unrelated word 'Account', which is not a proper sentence and does not answer the examiner's past-tense question. This is a sentence structure error (missing verb and subject). Suggestion: Form a full sentence that addresses the question, e.g., 'I had a bicycle when I was a child' or if unclear, ask for clarification: 'I don't understand the question.'

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because I like when you ride in the ride a vehicle in the street you see so many men bike in the street.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because when you ride on the street you see many men riding bicycles.

The original sentence has multiple problems including incorrect pronoun use ('you' shifts person awkwardly), extra words ('in the ride a vehicle'), and incorrect noun/verb forms ('men bike'). These are primarily pronoun and sentence structure issues. Suggestions: Keep consistent subject and person (use 'you' or 'people' generally), use correct verb forms ('ride' or 'riding') and nouns ('bicycles' or 'bikes'), and remove redundant phrases. A clearer version: 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because when you ride on the street you see many men riding bicycles.'