自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Clarify grammar and pronunciation, answer directly with a topic sentence, and add one short supporting detail. Use past tense and correct word choice (bike, not vibe). Keep it natural and concise.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I learned to ride it in the neighborhood when I was about six, and I used it every day to visit friends and buy small things from the corner shop.

建議: Make the sentence more natural by using articles and linking words; give a specific reason or brief example. Keep it under five sentences and use linking words such as "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are much more affordable than motorcycles or cars. For example, many students and low-income workers choose bicycles for short commutes since they are cheap to buy and maintain.

× I don't have a vibe when I was a child.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The student used present tense 'don't have' with a past time phrase 'when I was a child'; tense must be past: use 'didn't have'. Also 'vibe' is the wrong word; the intended noun is 'bike'. Use the past simple negative 'didn't have' plus the correct noun 'bike' to match the question's past timeframe.

× I think yes because bike is more affordable than motorcycle or any car.

✓ I think so because a bike is more affordable than a motorcycle or a car.

After 'I think' use 'so' rather than 'yes' in this context. Countable singular nouns like 'bike', 'motorcycle', and 'car' need articles: use 'a bike', 'a motorcycle', 'a car'. Also include the article before each noun to make the comparison grammatically correct.