自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Pronunciation, grammar and word choice need correction and the answer should be clearer and more concise. Begin with a direct topic sentence, correct verb forms and vocabulary (parents, bought/gave me a bike, enjoyed outdoor activities), and avoid irrelevant details. Use one or two linking words to add a brief reason. Keep it under five sentences.

範例: Yes. My parents bought me a bike when I was a child because they wanted me to enjoy outdoor activities. I rode it often around our neighborhood until I started using cars and public transport more as an adult because they are more convenient.

建議: Structure the answer with a clear topic sentence then compare the two countries using linking words (however, although, in contrast). Correct grammar (governments build/ have built, extended bike lanes) and add specific reasons or examples for Thailand instead of trailing off. Keep it concise and relevant.

範例: I live in both Switzerland and Thailand, and bikes are much more popular in Switzerland. The government has built extensive bike lanes, and the infrastructure and pleasant weather make cycling convenient. In contrast, cycling is less common in Thailand, partly because of traffic congestion and fewer safe bike lanes.

× Definitely, when I was a child, my parent usually gave bite for me because she loved to say me with a outdoor activity because of my heels.

✓ Definitely. When I was a child, my parents usually bought me a bike because my mother loved to involve me in outdoor activities since I had a lot of energy.

Pronoun and noun errors: 'parent' should be plural 'parents' if referring generally or specify 'my mother' for singular; original mixes 'she' with 'parent.' 'Gave bite for me' is incorrect word choice and preposition use — likely meant 'bought me a bike.' 'Say me with a outdoor activity' is ungrammatical; correct to 'involve me in outdoor activities.' 'Heels' is incorrect word for 'energy' or intended trait. Suggestion: keep subject consistent (parents/mother), use correct verbs for giving (buy), use 'buy someone something' structure and 'involve someone in' for participation, and choose correct nouns ('energy').

× However, nowadays I do not cycling anymore because I usually prefer private vehicle or public transport because it's more convenient.

✓ However, nowadays I do not cycle anymore because I usually prefer a private vehicle or public transport since they are more convenient.

Tense/verb form error: 'do not cycling' mixes auxiliary 'do' with -ing form; the correct base verb after 'do not' is 'cycle.' Article and noun number: 'private vehicle' needs an article 'a' and 'public transport' is uncountable; pronoun agreement: 'it's' should agree with plural idea 'they are' if referring to both options or rephrase to 'since that is more convenient.' Suggestion: use 'do not' + base verb, include articles where necessary, and ensure pronoun agreement with referenced nouns.

× I live in both Switzerland and Thailand.

✓ I live in both Switzerland and Thailand at different times.

Sentence is grammatically possible but ambiguous: 'I live in both Switzerland and Thailand' suggests simultaneous residence, which is unlikely. Better to clarify timeframes: 'at different times' or 'I split my time between Switzerland and Thailand.' Suggestion: specify timing to avoid confusion.

× If I talk about in Switzerland, it's extremely popular because government build the extended bike lanes so it's really convenient and good for the citizens and also the weather is pleasant.

✓ If I talk about Switzerland, cycling is extremely popular because the government has built extensive bike lanes, so it is very convenient and beneficial for citizens, and the weather is pleasant.

Preposition and article errors: 'talk about in Switzerland' should be 'talk about Switzerland.' Missing article: 'the government.' Verb tense: 'build' should be present perfect 'has built' to indicate completed action relevant now. 'Extended bike lanes' is awkward; 'extensive' or 'extended bike lanes' with 'built' is fine. 'Good for the citizens' better as 'beneficial for citizens.' Suggestion: remove unnecessary prepositions, include definite article before 'government,' use appropriate tense (present perfect) for completed developments, and choose precise adjectives.

× However in Thailand I think it's less common I don't know why but here

✓ However, in Thailand I think cycling is less common; I don't know why.

Run-on and incomplete sentence: original is missing punctuation and ends abruptly with 'but here' making it incomplete. Also pronoun 'it' unclear — specify 'cycling.' Suggestion: split into two clauses with proper punctuation and complete the thought. Replace 'but here' with a completed explanation or remove it.