自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Pronunciation and word choice: correct obvious mistakes (e.g., 'bite' -> 'bike', 'writing' -> 'riding') to sound natural. Structure: begin with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two concise supporting details using linking words. Content: give a specific brief detail (who bought it, how old you were, a simple result). Keep answers to no more than 4–5 sentences and avoid repetition.

範例: Yes. I had a pink bike that my parents gave me when I was seven. At first I found it difficult to ride, but after practicing in the park every day I became much more confident. It was my favorite toy and I used it to visit my friends.

建議: Grammar and fluency: produce a complete sentence and correct word order (e.g., 'In Korea, bikes are not very popular'). Structure: state your main opinion first, then provide 1–2 supporting reasons with linking words (e.g., 'because', 'so'). Content: be specific about reasons (urban density, good public transport, weather) and finish the thought. Keep it concise and coherent.

範例: In Korea, I don't think bikes are very popular because most people prefer public transport like the subway or buses. Also, cities are crowded and cycling can be inconvenient, so many people choose faster, safer options.

× When I was a child I had a pink bite which parents bought me.

✓ When I was a child I had a pink bike that my parents bought me.

The sentence has two issues: 'bite' is a spelling error (should be 'bike'), and 'which parents bought me' lacks the necessary definite article and natural word order. Use 'my parents' to show possession and 'that' (or 'which') to introduce the defining relative clause. Also include the article 'a' already present before 'pink bike' is correct.

× At first I found it difficult to writing it, but after practicing a lot.

✓ At first I found it difficult to write, but I improved after practicing a lot.

The verb form after 'difficult to' should be the base form 'write' (infinitive without 'to' in this construction is 'to write' but 'difficult to write' is correct; here 'to writing' is wrong). The original sentence is also incomplete ('but after practicing a lot' lacks a main clause). Provide a complete contrast clause: 'but I improved after practicing a lot.' This fixes verb form and sentence completeness.

× Actually not I think people in Korea I usually use either transport like subway or bus and

✓ Actually not. I think people in Korea usually use public transport like the subway or buses.

This fragment has multiple structural problems: misplaced words ('Actually not I think'), an unnecessary pronoun 'I' before 'usually', and missing articles and plural agreement ('subway or bus' should be 'the subway or buses' when speaking generally). Also 'either' requires two parallel items and is unnecessary here. Rewriting to 'I think people in Korea usually use public transport like the subway or buses.' corrects word order, article use, and plurality.