自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar and naturalness: use past tense consistently, give a direct topic sentence and add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it concise (max 5 sentences). For example, start with "No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child." Then briefly explain why or what you used instead, e.g. "Instead, I usually walked to school or took the bus because my family lived in the city."

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school or took the bus because my family lived in a busy city and it wasn’t practical to cycle. Occasionally I borrowed a neighbor's bike to ride in the park.

建議: Expand the answer with a topic sentence and specific supporting details using linking words. Explain how they are popular (who uses them, where, and why), and give a brief example or comparison. Keep it natural and concise.

範例: Yes, I do think bikes are popular in my country. For instance, many students and commuters use bicycles for short trips because they are cheap and convenient, and cities have been adding bike lanes recently to encourage cycling.

× No, when I was a child, I don't have a bike.

✓ No, when I was a child, I didn't have a bike.

'Don't have' is present tense and does not match the past time reference 'when I was a child.' Use past tense 'didn't have.' Also, use the auxiliary 'did' plus base verb 'have' for negation in simple past. Suggestion: use 'I didn't have a bike' for past situations.

× Yes, I do.

✓ Yes, they are.

'Do' is a short answer to a 'Do you think bikes are popular...' question but is less specific. A clearer short answer refers to the subject 'bikes' and the adjective 'popular.' Use 'Yes, they are' to match present simple and plural subject. Alternatively 'Yes, I do' could be acceptable if the student means 'Yes, I do think so' but as a direct short form matching the question's subject, 'Yes, they are' is preferred.