自行车— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
考生
No because my parent they can't afford food we buy cycle due to I had two older brother and they get everything. So when it's come to the time I didn't had a new bike I will say but I had my all the older brother bike.
考官
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
考生
Yes, they are. They're very popular because everyone has a bike and you're not a country where people have their own vehicle. Like the parents, they can't afford to own their own private vehicle. So we are more dependent on common transport and that's why we own.
評估
總分
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
分數: 45.0建議: Improve grammar and clarity by using a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and punctuation, and give one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words (e.g., "because", "so", "however") appropriately and keep the answer under five sentences. For example, say you did not have a bike, give the reason (financial and older siblings), and mention if you ever used their bikes or how you felt about it.
範例: No, I didn’t have my own bike as a child because my parents couldn’t afford one and my two older brothers had priority. However, I often used my brothers’ bicycles when they let me, which helped me learn to ride and saved money on transport.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
分數: 60.0建議: Make the answer more natural and specific: start with a clear topic sentence, then give two concise supporting points (e.g., affordability and practical reasons). Use correct phrasing ("in my country" not "you're not a country") and link ideas with words like "because", "so", or "therefore." Avoid repetition and keep it to 2–3 sentences.
範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. This is mainly because many families cannot afford private cars, so bicycles are an affordable and convenient way to travel short distances. As a result, you see large numbers of bikes used for commuting and running errands.
文法
× 'No because my parent they can't afford food we buy cycle due to I had two older brother and they get everything.'
✓ 'No, because my parents couldn\'t afford to buy a bicycle for me; I had two older brothers and they got everything.'
'Parents' should be plural to agree with context (more than one parent). Use past tense 'couldn\'t afford' to match past-time question. 'Afford to buy a bicycle' is the correct verb pattern (afford + to + verb). 'Cycle' is corrected to 'bicycle' (countable noun) and 'brother' to plural 'brothers'. Also change 'they get everything' to past 'they got everything' for consistent past narration. Suggestion: ensure subjects and verbs agree in number and tense and use correct verb patterns.'},{
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