自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevabınızı daha akıcı ve doğru bir dilbilgisi ile verin; gereksiz tekrarları ve dolgu kelimelerini (um, hmm) azaltın. Önce doğrudan konu cümlesi kurun (ör. "No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child."), sonra kısa bir açıklama ekleyin (neden olmadığını veya nasıl hareket ettiğinizi belirtin). Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlenizi mantıksal olarak genişletin ve 2-3 cümleyi geçmeyin.

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked or took public transport to school because my family couldn't afford one. As a result, I became used to walking long distances.

建議: Daha doğal ve kesin ifadeler kullanın; genel yargı yaparken 'everyone' gibi kesin sözcüklerden kaçının ve sebep-sonuç ilişkisini bağlaçlarla belirtin. Örneğin, önce görüşünüzü açıkça söyleyin, sonra kısa bir neden verin ve gerekirse bir örnek ekleyin. Ayrıca 'motorcycle' ve 'bike' kelimelerinin farkını net kullanın.

範例: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. Many people prefer motorcycles because they are faster and more convenient for longer distances. For example, in my town most commuters use scooters or motorbikes to get to work.

× No, I didn't have a bike, umm, when my child, when I was child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The original sentence repeats phrases and uses incorrect noun phrase 'my child' instead of 'I'. This is a sentence structure and pronoun reference error. Remove the redundant clause and use the correct subject 'I' with the age phrase 'a child'. Suggestion: say 'When I was a child' or 'when I was young' and avoid repeating the same idea.

× I think not at all because everyone used the motorcycle instead bike.

✓ I don't think so at all because everyone used motorcycles instead of bikes.

The original sentence has singular/plural inconsistencies and missing preposition 'of'. 'Everyone' is followed by a plural noun when referring to people using vehicles generally: 'motorcycles' is correct. Also use 'instead of' to show replacement. Additionally, use the present or past consistently; if speaking generally in past: 'used motorcycles instead of bikes' is fine; for present: 'uses motorcycles instead of bikes'.