自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is not responsive to the examiner's question and contains grammatical errors. First, directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence (e.g., Yes, I did / No, I didn’t). Then add one or two supporting details using linking words (because, so, for example) and specific information (age, who bought it, how often you used it). Keep answers natural, concise (no more than 3–4 short sentences), and grammatically correct.

範例: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small red bike when I was seven, and I rode it almost every day after school. Because I lived near a park, I practiced riding there with my older brother until I felt confident.

建議: Your response repeats the examiner's question rather than answering it, and contains a pronunciation/spelling error ('bias' instead of 'bikes'). Start with a clear opinion (e.g., Yes, they are / No, not really), then support it with specific reasons and examples using linking words (for example, because, therefore). Use relevant vocabulary like commute, exercise, traffic, or environment. Keep it short and coherent.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them to commute short distances and to exercise. For example, in cities you can see many cyclists on dedicated bike lanes, especially during the morning and evening rush hours.

× Did you have buy when you were child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student omitted the noun 'bike' and used incorrect verb combination 'have buy'. This is a sentence structure error: the correct interrogative for past possession uses 'Did you have' + object. Also 'child' requires the article 'a' when saying 'a child'. Suggestion: use 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' or 'Did you own a bike when you were a child?'. Note: According to the provided list, this fits ID 26 (Sentence structure errors).

× Do you think bias are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The student misspelled 'bikes' as 'bias' causing a wrong word; the noun 'bikes' (plural) correctly agrees with the plural verb 'are'. This is primarily a subject-verb agreement/word choice issue: ensure the subject noun matches the intended meaning and number. Suggestion: correct spelling and keep plural form: 'bikes are'. Note: According to the provided list, this fits ID 27 (Subject-verb agreement errors).