自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: You repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a direct response with a topic sentence, then add 1–2 supporting details (specifics such as age, who gave it, or how often you rode) using a linking word. Keep it natural and under five sentences.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a blue bicycle when I was about eight, which my parents bought for me as a birthday present. I rode it to school and around the neighborhood almost every day, so it became one of my favorite toys.

建議: You repeated the examiner's question and made a small grammar error (“at” instead of “in”). Answer directly and state your opinion, then give a specific reason or example using a linking word (for example, because, however). Use appropriate prepositions and keep to under five sentences.

範例: Yes, I think bicycles are fairly popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For instance, in cities you often see commuters and students cycling to work or school, especially during warm months.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I did.

The original student response simply repeated the examiner's question, which is a sentence structure/response error rather than a grammatical form error. A proper answer should directly respond with a subject and verb. Using 'Yes, I did.' correctly provides a brief affirmative response in past tense matching the question. For fuller answers, use 'Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.' or 'No, I didn't.' to show clear subject-verb structure and correct past tense usage.

× Do you think bikes are popular at your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The incorrect preposition 'at' is used with 'country'. The correct preposition to indicate location within a country is 'in'. Use 'in your country' to ask about popularity within that nation. This fixes the prepositional error and makes the sentence natural and grammatically correct.