自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is direct and natural but too short. Add one or two supporting details (e.g., who gave it to you, how often you rode it, or a brief memory) using a linking phrase to expand coherently. Keep it to a maximum of 3–4 sentences and avoid repetition.

範例: Yes, of course. My parents bought me a small red bike when I was seven, and I used to ride it to visit friends every weekend. I remember practicing until I could ride without training wheels, which made me feel very independent.

建議: The answer is unclear and contains mistakes (word choice and repetition). Start with a clear topic sentence stating your opinion, then give specific supporting details with linking words (e.g., "because", "for example"). Use correct vocabulary ("bike" not "bite") and avoid repeating the same phrase.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, when I was a child many families owned at least one bike, and children often rode to school or to the park after classes.

× As I remember when I was a child, everyone got the bite. Every month everyone got the bite.

✓ As I remember from my childhood, everyone got a bike. Every month, everyone got a bike.

The original sentence uses the incorrect word 'bite' instead of 'bike', which makes the meaning unclear; this is a lexical choice error and affects sentence structure (ID 26). Also the phrasing 'As I remember when I was a child' is awkward; 'As I remember from my childhood' is more natural and fits the past context. Add a comma after 'Every month' for clarity. Suggestion: replace incorrect word, streamline the time phrase, and add necessary punctuation.