自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Provide a fuller, natural response that directly answers the question and adds one or two specific details. Use a topic sentence and then briefly support it with a reason or example. Keep the answer concise (1–3 sentences) and grammatically correct.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family lived in a busy city, so my parents thought it wasn’t safe for me to ride on the roads.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence and then support it with specific reasons or examples, using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid irrelevant personal details unless they directly relate. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' to make your point coherent.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, in cities you often see people riding bicycles to work or school, especially to avoid traffic.

× 'Yes, I think biker popular in a in our country.'

✓ 'Yes, I think biking is popular in our country.'

'biker' is a noun meaning a person who rides a bike, but the speaker means the activity; use the gerund or noun "biking" or the noun phrase "bicycles". The adjective "popular" needs a verb to link it to the subject, so use "is popular". Also remove the extra article "a" before "in" and the duplicate preposition. Suggested improvement: identify whether you mean the activity (biking) or the objects (bikes) and use the correct noun plus the verb "is/are" (for example, "Bikes are popular" or "Biking is popular").'

× 'But I am a girl so I have no bike.'

✓ 'But I am a girl, so I do not have a bike.'

'have no bike' is understandable but less natural in conversational English; using "do not have" (or the contraction "don't have") follows standard negation with the verb "have" in present simple. Also add a comma before the coordinating conjunction "so" to separate the clauses. Suggestion: use "I don't have a bike" in spoken responses for naturalness and clarity.'