自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the response more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct articles and age expression, and add one or two specific supporting details using a linking word. Keep it concise (no more than 5 sentences).

範例: Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was ten, and I enjoyed riding it around my neighborhood. For example, I used to cycle to my friend’s house every afternoon, which helped me learn balance and made me feel independent.

建議: Improve grammar, verb tense and word order, and provide a clearer contrast using linking words (e.g., "however" or "but"). Be specific about reasons or examples to support your opinion. Keep it direct and avoid redundancy.

範例: Bicycles used to be very common when I was a child; however, nowadays cars and buses are more widely used. This change is mainly because more people can afford private cars and public transport has improved, so fewer people choose to cycle for daily travel.

× I had a bike when I was a 10 years old and I enjoyed it so much.

✓ I had a bike when I was 10 years old and I enjoyed it so much.

The phrase 'a 10 years old' mixes an indefinite article with a plural noun and an age expression. Ages are expressed as 'X years old' without the article 'a' when using a number: 'I was 10 years old.' Removing 'a' and using the singular '10 years' as part of the age expression fixes the grammar. Suggestion: say 'I was 10 years old' or 'when I was ten.'

× Bike was in common when I was in childhood, but nowadays cars and buses are the transport is more common than bike

✓ Bicycles were common when I was a child, but nowadays cars and buses are more common than bikes.

This sentence contains several errors: 'Bike was in common' is ungrammatical—use plural 'bicycles' and the adjective 'common' with the past tense 'were' to match plural subject. 'When I was in childhood' is incorrect; use 'when I was a child.' The second clause has an extra 'the transport is' and mismatched comparison; simplify to 'cars and buses are more common than bikes.' Also ensure plural forms match ('bicycles'/'bikes') and verb tense is consistent. Suggestion: 'Bicycles were common when I was a child, but nowadays cars and buses are more common than bikes.'