自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be grammatically accurate, concise, and chronological. Start with a clear past-tense topic sentence, correct verb forms and time expressions, and avoid filler words. Give one or two specific details (why or what kind of bike) and keep it under five sentences. For example, say you didn’t have a bike during early childhood but got one later, and mention when and why.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike as a young child. After I finished my A-levels, I bought a used mountain bike to commute to college because public transport was slow. It was blue and had wide tires, which made it good for rough roads.

建議: Structure your answer: give a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific reasons with linking words (because, for example, therefore). Reduce fillers and correct grammar (countable nouns, verb forms). Provide a concrete example or contrast to strengthen your point and keep it concise.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and flexible. For example, many people use bicycles to avoid crowded buses and to save money on fares, especially for short trips around town.

× No, I haven't, but when I were in a child, after I did my A levels, I, uh, I had a bike.

✓ No, I didn't, but when I was a child, after I did my A-levels, I had a bike.

Multiple pronoun and auxiliary errors: 'haven't' is present perfect and inappropriate for a past simple question; use 'didn't' to answer 'Did you have...'. 'Were' is wrong for singular first person in past simple; use 'was'. 'in a child' is incorrect preposition/article use; use 'a child' without 'in'. Ensure tense consistency: past simple ('did/didn't', 'was', 'had'). Suggestion: Use past simple for completed past events and correct subject-verb agreement ('I was').

× Yes, I think uh, in our country, uh, bikes are very popular because it's a very convenient for everyone to uh, travel without uh, by bus or by train because they are just uh, so many uh, peoples are travel by bus and uh trains.

✓ Yes, I think in our country bikes are very popular because they are very convenient for everyone to travel instead of taking buses or trains, because so many people travel by bus and train.

Several tense and form issues: 'it's a very convenient' mixes singular 'it' with plural 'bikes' and uses 'a' unnecessarily; change to 'they are very convenient'. 'to travel without by bus or by train' is incorrect preposition and word order; use 'instead of taking buses or trains'. 'peoples' is wrong plural noun; use 'people'. 'are travel' mixes auxiliary 'are' with base verb; use 'travel'. Suggestion: Keep subject and verb forms consistent, use correct plural nouns ('people'), and use 'instead of' or 'rather than' to contrast modes of transport.

× So I think bike is very convenient.

✓ So I think bikes are very convenient.

Number mismatch: 'bike' is singular while referring to bikes in general; use plural 'bikes' and match verb 'are'. Suggestion: When making general statements about a category, use the plural noun form or 'the' with singular (e.g., 'The bike is...') and ensure subject-verb agreement.